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Kiss - Pleiades K

Kilometres ‘tween us... Keepsakes serve to sustain Kudos for your restrain Knock at my door excites Kindled passion ignites Keeping lips pressed to mine Keen, hungry, tongues entwine --------------------------------- March 2017 For the "Pleiades K" contest sponsored by Kim Merryman - (Joint) Third Place.

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/19/2017 3:27:00 PM

Just swinging back to congratulate you on a wonderful well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita

John Michaels
Date: 4/1/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thanks so much for your continued support and encouragement! It means a lot!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2017 4:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, John :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels
Date: 3/19/2017 7:30:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. Just trying new things and showing I can do more than Haiku!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2017 5:15:00 PM

A well written, "steamy" Pleiades, John! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim

John Michaels
Date: 3/13/2017 5:20:00 PM

Thanks, Kim - and for running the contest. I'll be keeping an eye out for your next one!

John Michaels
Date: 3/13/2017 5:16:00 PM

Yes, that's right - never written in this form before. I have done a lot of alliteration, so hopefully that'll help! Thank you for your enthusiastic comments as ever!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2017 7:50:00 PM

wow, John,You sure did a GREAT job . It's your first, right? what an excellent way to do it. I hope to see this one high on the winner list.

John Michaels
Date: 3/13/2017 5:19:00 PM

Sorry, the reply above was meant for you, but I think Kim's comments popped in before it could refresh. Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/12/2017 7:48:00 PM

John, you're the man! Love this exciting, sensuous write! This was a big challenge using the letter "K" but you aced it, my friend! A-7! Pandita

John Michaels
Date: 3/13/2017 5:22:00 PM

Thank you for your amazing feedback and your continued support! Thought I would try something completely different!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2017 5:03:00 PM

oohh a sensual poem John good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels
Date: 3/13/2017 5:14:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments!