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Kismet

“That ego residue of past be shorn ~ We are time and again, on earth reborn” ~ quote by poet Linear time sounds love's chime, that soul may heavenward climb but most of us heed it not, trapped in a narrow thought slot. God enables if we're still but if we defy His will, we're tossed about like a leaf by fate, shrouding us in grief. Life, as it plays, is ordained to test if our soul's yet stained by ego spawned dark desires, that deluded heart aspires. Both joy and pain come our way but if love is our mainstay, fate has no hold over us and fears no longer nonplus. Life's a school, we're here to learn, to grow in love, as we burn. Redeeming sins of our past, as we chose, the die is cast. Making lamp of love soul's sconce, what matters is our response, moment to moment in life, free from strife, always joy rife. Oh hermit, this life's a dream, where love not fate, reigns supreme and once we truly know this, soul becomes the flame of bliss. 10-March-2023 ____________ Writing Challenge - 'K' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France HMS, Rhymezone, PS Gramnar
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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Seeker, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Seeker Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 6:03 AM
So happy you found this worthy of a placement!
George Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:16 PM
"Both joy and pain come our way but if love is our mainstay, fate has no hold over us and fears no longer nonplus." I cannot choose any single stanza as my favorite. Each one contains gems of wisdom. So lovely and profound. Congratulations Seeker friend on your high placement. To my FAVE
Seeker Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:31 PM
Thank you dear Valsa ~ hope you are doing well. I’m so delighted these words resonate in your glowing heart.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Seeker - I truly enjoyed the depth, calm and serenity of your poem. So many quotable lines I admired - "to grow in love, as we burn." is a precious one. You are brilliant in using interesting forms - kudos to you.
Seeker Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:30 PM
Thank you, Mala! I do employ this form a fair bit. Constance introduced me to it.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 2:19 PM
- Love the quote and the poem, U.S. :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Seeker Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Thank you dear Sunshine :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote/picture. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Seeker Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Paula ~ hope you are doing well
Emate Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 11:47 AM
This is a beautiful poem, Seeker. Congratulations.
Seeker Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Thank you my dear!
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 5:35 AM
A wonderful journey with your words, Seeker - A great saying at the top - Best wishes in the contest :)
Seeker Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Thank you, SP
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