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Kismet - First Place Contest Winner

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In the realm where time does spin, Where destinies are shaped within, There is a force we cannot escape. Kismet, the weaver of our fate, shape With threads of gold and silver, it swam Kismet weaves a tapestry, never scram Through the dance of destiny, we are bound. In the symphony of life, we are found. With each step we bear, fortune guides, Leading us to where our path resides. In the twists and shifts of life's grand dance, Kismet's hand leads us into a trance. From the cradle to the grave, Our destinies, since childhood, engraves. On the darkest nights and brightest days, Kismet's presence never strays. In the moments of bliss and sorrow's embrace, Fate can touch and leave an indelible trace. Through the highs and lows, the ups and downs, Destiny's hand orchestrates the profound. In the meeting of souls, destiny weaves a tale. Binding hearts together without fail. In the paths we cross and the choices we make, Fate's influence we cannot shake. In the grand tapestry of life's design, Doom's hand intertwines with mine. Through the joys and tears that we endure, Kismet's touch remains pure. So let us dance to the rhythm of fate, Embracing the twists and shifts that await In the dance of kismet, we find our place. Knowing that destiny's hand we cannot erase. For in the dance of destiny, we are set free, To live our lives with love and glee. So let us embrace the dance of Kismet, With clear hearts and spirits lit. For in its intricate steps and turns, Our truest selves, it discerns. In the tapestry of life, we find Destiny's touch is both gentle and kind. 1st place contest winner

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Date: 9/18/2023 10:04:00 PM
Lovely Poem, I'm a little late to the party, but congrats on the win. :)
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Date: 7/16/2023 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write and beautiful picture. Have a good day writing away..........................
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Date: 7/16/2023 3:48:00 AM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- K Word with this wonderful poem, I love the image and the music !
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Date: 7/15/2023 8:36:00 PM
Fate is, indeed, a great concept in Indian philosophy too. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2023 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations, I knew it was a winner !
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Date: 7/15/2023 6:05:00 AM
Having based my poem on the same word, and seeing you and Edward, also choosing it and both writing wonderful poems, made me delighted that I had chosen a popular topic. My friend your poem is enchanting, with phrases such as Where destinies are shaped within, and the dance of destiny... So Simply Splendid. I hope you are having a marvelous vacation. You wont need my wishes of luck for this entry, its a winner.
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Date: 7/15/2023 5:17:00 AM
Wonderful dialogue on fate, my friend. It is a powerful force that humanity tries to steer but can't always.
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Date: 7/15/2023 4:21:00 AM
Wonderful words. I just love this. I hadn't heard that word before to be honest and always love learning a new word, You're a wonderful writer and teacher. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/15/2023 2:52:00 AM
- Excellently executed poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest ... a top win without a doubt ... brilliant - hugs
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Date: 7/14/2023 8:15:00 PM
Lasaad, you have sculptured the elements of poetry. I like the lines, "Kismet, the weaver of our fate, shape, In the symphony of life, Binding hearts together without fail." If for the contest a win already.
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Date: 7/14/2023 6:22:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Sotto! I must admit, had to look up the meaning of Kismet, and now I know it means destiny :) I'm always happy to find the meaning of a new word I am not quite acquainted with. This is yet another of your great works. I am so often not able to be on here, and when I am, I am always so blessed to read such beautiful poetry, your ability is awe inspiring! This poem is a beautiful work of art!
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Date: 7/14/2023 3:41:00 PM
wonderful poem, i didn't know the Kismet, will seek for it
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