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July.13.2023
Writing Challenge 'K' Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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"Look around and see how birds and animals disclose the secrets of self survival and display how their bodies are streamlined to excel in their art"- By Poet
In the twisting tangle of the mangrove Where eye can’t see beyond leaves Sits a kingfisher, very alert, Without the smallest quirk or quiver. Its wings are bluer than the blue skies, And body brighter than the brightest gold. It sits surveying intently the water, Flowing down the river. With its sharp polaroid eyes It spies the shoal of fish, Darting up and down. Measuring the distance It makes a sudden move, Diving into the water. All we see is a flash of amber and blue, And the water suddenly splashing up, With a harsh clinking sound. Sweeping down, the bird comes up, With a sloshing silver fish, Dangling from its beak like an ornate pendant And landing down on a dry twig. The fish shuddering in its beak Is gulped down in no time, Then it wheels away To its accustomed cover in the mangrove To preen its feathers and resume Its hunting game once again! It sits there, this skilled angler, Till the hilltops turn auburn, And the far -flung sky, stygian. Then it flies back seeking its far away nest In some sandy burrow or cavern.

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Date: 7/17/2023 10:11:00 AM
Beautiful bird and poem, this bird must be a great at fishing with this name , I need one of these helping me : )
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Date: 7/17/2023 3:59:00 AM
Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/16/2023 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture/quote. Have a good day writing away..........................
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Date: 7/16/2023 3:53:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- K Word with this beautifully penned poem, I love your quote and the image too !
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Valsa George
Date: 7/16/2023 7:21:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Constance on choosing my poem for a win.
Date: 7/15/2023 8:37:00 PM
A very detailed illustration on one of the very beautiful birds, kingfisher. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/13/2023 9:53:00 PM
What a great write, you put so much of into your work. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/13/2023 6:27:00 PM
so beautiful, have never seen kingfisher, butb i can now imagine, thanks a lot
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Date: 7/13/2023 11:44:00 AM
- Beautiful poem ... beautiful bird ... interesting to read, Valsa :) - Not a bird that lives in Norway - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2023 9:57:00 PM
Really, not a bird lives in Norway? They are so beautiful and the music they sing, I love to hear. There is one bird I hear every day that it sounds like it is saying," Pretty Bird" and repeats itself. I love to mimic it.
Date: 7/13/2023 10:22:00 AM
I thought Kingfisher was Indian beer!!
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Valsa George
Date: 7/14/2023 5:16:00 AM
That's interesting...... :) :)
Date: 7/13/2023 7:36:00 AM
Simply beautiful. You brought forth the dynamic scenes for the reader--with lively descriptions. Much enjoyed your poem, Valsa. A FAVE.
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Valsa George
Date: 7/13/2023 8:21:00 PM
Feel honored that you have made it a FAVE. Thanks a lot dear Vijay
Date: 7/13/2023 7:12:00 AM
You described this amazing bird to a tee Valsa. We have a relation to the Kingfisher in Australia called the Kookaburra and its call sounds like it is laughing. Loved your descriptive poem. The image you instilled in the reader's mind, is unsurpassed. Thank you Valsa, you never fail to delight.
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Date: 7/13/2023 5:48:00 AM
That’s an interesting nature story, nicely told. I enjoyed it.
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