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King Sun and Queen Moon

With one big bright eye, Sun, King of the sky, looks down on us, but not always mellow. In summertime, he shoots rays from that eye, sometimes so mightily, grass turns yellow or streams run dry beneath the King's stern stare. His queen, the moon, shows not so mad a face. She takes his place when night's cool fills the air. She rules among the shining stars with grace, for she is beautiful. La Luna's light seduces lovers. Moonstruck we may be when she shows forth her full face in the night. Although her beams are soft, power has she! She pulls high tides toward her. Unlike the sun, she takes no credit for Sun's glory days. Eight phases she goes through. A timid one? Perhaps she's simply got a woman's ways! May 28, 2020 For The Sun and the Moon Contest of Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 6/1/2020 9:38:00 PM
I love this Andrea! I am happy it won Second Place. Congratulations! Your ending is simply superb! I am putting this into my Faves! xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2020 11:58:00 PM
Visiting again to congratulate you on your win, Andrea:) well written:)
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Date: 5/31/2020 1:52:00 PM
Aww that is beautiful perhaps it is just her woman ways. Nicely written my friend. Hope all is well with you. Yes things are removed and not posted I agree from your note. love phyl
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Date: 5/31/2020 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations my friend! Wonderfully done in a woman's way.
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Date: 5/31/2020 10:09:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 5/31/2020 5:15:00 AM
Nice
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Date: 5/30/2020 11:02:00 PM
Love the verse. Royalty they are, Andrea, one to let us sleep the other to enjoy the beauty of earth. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/30/2020 6:46:00 PM
Beautiful poem Andrea, I don't know how you do it, Fantastic writing. Congratulations on your podium win.
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Date: 5/30/2020 3:29:00 PM
Ingenious personification! You've put up a mirror to make people see things they normally see in a different way! Congrats and bravo, Andrea:-)
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Date: 5/30/2020 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful way to say, "King Sun and Queen Moon." Guess we will now see them as king and queen. Enjoy your win and day..............
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Date: 5/30/2020 3:00:00 PM
Back to congratulate your win for this AWESOME sonnet, my friend!
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Date: 5/30/2020 12:24:00 PM
True! I believe women like the moon spread light and blessings without taking any credits. Love the metaphors Andrea. Congratulations on your splendid win :)
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Date: 5/30/2020 6:54:00 AM
Love the "woman's way" at the end and the pulling of the tides; you can never take the teacher out of the teacher Andrea.
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Date: 5/29/2020 1:35:00 PM
a woman's wiles? Yes, quite right, the moon IS trickier than the sun! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/29/2020 12:29:00 PM
Andrea, I was hoping I would see a personification of Sun and Moon from you, as you excel in this. Another wonderful write, beautiful in it IP, thoughtful in its musings of the Sun/Moon relationship, and ending on a clever note. Best wishes in the contest (which appears to be closing soon) ~ John
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Date: 5/29/2020 9:32:00 AM
Great personification Andrea enjoyed!
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Date: 5/29/2020 9:18:00 AM
I too have personified the sun and the moon as king and queen in a poem I wrote long ago, but yours is far beautiful, short and sweet, love the twist at the end:)
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Date: 5/29/2020 8:46:00 AM
WOW!!! Such a beautiful graceful poem! I enjoyed it so much. Much love sent to you
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Date: 5/29/2020 7:00:00 AM
They have their own special place in our heart. Well said, Andrea:... sometimes so mightily, grass turns yellow or streams run dry beneath the King's stern stare...
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