King of the Field

The bitumen sockets of a fox's skull gape out across 
an open field, testament to open-casketed interment. 
Starlings pulse ephemeral iredescence in a cascade of 
limitless water falls. Autumn's late sun throws shapeless 
shadows across a ruined tree, hunched over, its grey-brown
bark witness to countless years of inflicted torture.
And the cinching together of its narrow waisted branches
scream against the weight of delinquent crows. 

Redundant pose of a one-legged king leans 
into nonexistent wind, pointing malnutritioned 
sticks accusingly at the ignoble intent of winged demons. 
An impertinent robin perched on his dilapidated crown, 
sounds the nocturnal 'last call' to all who are still abroad.
A blanket of evening mist enshrouds his kingdom safe
from vespertine raiders and sharp-witted foxes. 

The King has put his night cap on and stalkers rule the silver 
veils and black-tarred veins, listening to the land breathe. 
Patient ears reveal a midnight snack and a mothers heartbreak,
as nature's competitors endure its contest. Sly look meets
fertive glance on hard won boundary, and pensive new -
comer tastes the trees for scent of ownership.

The nights smudged daub drags into early morning coloured 
calls between the feathered demons of the worm-fertile field, 
as the redundant mists finish a hard nights shift, and the lost soul
of the night is easily replaced by nature's gift. And the King, woken
from his slumber, stands careful watch over his dominion once more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/24/2015 9:21:00 AM
Dazzling imagery and powerful phrasing... I am constantly amazed by your depth of feeling and your outstanding language. Each line is full of brilliance! '...a blanket of evening mist enshrouds his kingdom safe from vespertine raiders and sharp-witted foxes,' just one of so many outstanding expressions. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/24/2015 9:26:00 AM
...Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours from me and mine! K.
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/24/2015 9:24:00 AM
Keith, thank you so much. Your words are always so encouraging. Merry Christmas to you and your family
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/24/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Silent One
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