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But what is man, but an insignificant insect in my dominant domain? A wasteful clan, pernicious and prejudicious roaming the open plain… Using a destructive plan, a killing machine building their festive feasts, Invading the Sudan, hunting for their prey calling me, the King of beasts. Am I not an animal, only killing when I hunger to feed the restless pride? And a lion lacrimal, for I also shed tears when I lose my bar caged bride… A fading fractional, our dominance diminishing amidst the wilderness wing, A feline fallible upon extinction, but for this direful day, I’m still the King. Pic #3 Background music: African chanting Voice: Male Virtual Voice Music at the end: Maroon 5-'Animals' April.30.2019 Free verse or Rhyme Sponsored by: Eve Roper Placed 3'rd...Thank You

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Date: 5/5/2019 7:15:00 PM
^WW^, congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest. Come and visit my Blog.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/5/2019 1:52:00 PM
WW, you did great justice to the picture. One of the best of the lion poems!
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Date: 5/5/2019 1:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2019 11:18:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your win WW...
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Date: 5/2/2019 5:56:00 PM
Your expressive poetic voice roars in this compelling, meaningful and exceptional piece, my soul bro. I love the personification of the ‘King’, and was moved by his righteous indignation and emotion. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my dearest bro bro. Love, light and lions.. ~your sane sissy <3
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Date: 5/2/2019 10:32:00 AM
This is exquisite WW! This should to well in this popular contest. xxoo
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Date: 5/1/2019 4:03:00 PM
WW, you roar high with this splendid write, and no matter how lazy, bored a lion may be; in the end, he rules the jungle... nice job!...huggs
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Date: 5/1/2019 11:06:00 AM
^WW^ I applaud you for you are King of this contest - This poem should be sent to the South African Getaway magazine together - www.getaway.co.za - I can't describe to you how much you touched my heartstrings with this poem - I love lions! If you wish read my poem "Will His Majesty become Extinct" Hugs, Jen.
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Date: 4/30/2019 6:36:00 PM
The way you did the video made it all the more powerful...Great write WW....
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Date: 4/30/2019 2:10:00 PM
Very creative my friend.. your video---spoken like a king. Well done, WW.
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Date: 4/30/2019 2:02:00 PM
- An awesome poem about this amazing animal, W.W. - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/30/2019 1:20:00 PM
Roarsome! Fabulous verbiage! Grrr!
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Date: 4/30/2019 1:06:00 PM
A glorious personification , profound with thunderous verses and touching messages! Superbly written dear, WW!
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Date: 4/30/2019 12:50:00 PM
Hi WW; You depicted the lion in all it's poetic glory. My compliments!
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Date: 4/30/2019 12:20:00 PM
Wow what a stunning presentation, this will take some beating I'm sure. Tom
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Date: 4/30/2019 9:18:00 AM
Exquisite piece! my friend, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Date: 4/30/2019 8:34:00 AM
WW, fantastic poem and amazing audio, best of luck in the contest, you are so talented and this is a fav for me !
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Date: 4/30/2019 8:23:00 AM
Well done WW! I love the ending too :)
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