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Kindness' Treat

Bereft of Halloween exposure gain in a family where such is inane alien to her, but curiosity prods… since truth she seeks beyond trickery stain. Readying herself for challenging bout she must triumph over attacking doubt midst reality of souls, sucking blood in their scheduled children abduction route. With cautionary zeal, she strives to wait perhaps lurking vampires today are late yet, she prays as fear starts gripping her heart… smiting the feeling of paralyzed state. Propped by courage from learned Bible story she dismisses thoughts against what’s gory cognizant of diabolical schemes Satan keeps sowing for evil’s glory. Now, feasting on the peace* of God so sweet she praises Him for secured love complete indeed, grateful for bestowed hallowed win to celebrate while sharing kindness’ treat.
*Hebrews 12:14 Follow peace with all men, and holiness, without which no man shall see the Lord. October 29, 2020 8th place, "Halloween Challenge" Premier Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet; judged on 11/16/2020.

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Date: 11/8/2020 5:56:00 AM
I love this "kindness' treat" Beata. Congratulations on the win! hugs {} Linda
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Date: 11/7/2020 9:56:00 AM
Back with congratulations Beata! Really creative use of the required words! Harvest blessings my friend :)
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Date: 11/7/2020 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations Beata! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my spooky Halloween contest, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 10/29/2020 5:52:00 PM
Interesting one. It seems you do not cotton to Halloween! I think this year there will be no trick or treaters at my door because of Covid.
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Date: 10/29/2020 10:36:00 AM
So creative Beata and tied to a beautiful scripture - as always! For me Halloween is not about horror or the diabolical but about Jesus' victory over death! Best wishes for the contest!
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