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I listen to whimpers as duskfall nears Finding a gangly waif rile from burnt skin; My feet throttles along…his grin appears With palm half-filled with dimes circling therein. We talk warmly about this waif's despair Of how prayers- heal abating such plight-- As he shares moist wheat-bread in hours that bear A street child’s gentle spirit… on etch of night Gazing far I see the boy wave his arm As if to echo our words that console : But from heart’s pit, he enkindles a charm Restoring my sense of kindness… now whole. * 3rd place NA- Re-run 7 Contest of John Hamilton Originally Written 6/9/2020 Judged 6/9/2020 Re-submitted 6/14/2020

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Date: 6/17/2020 2:05:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Nette :) Much love
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Date: 6/15/2020 9:50:00 AM
A very touching write Nette, you never disappoint, congrats on a win this time round!
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Date: 6/10/2020 3:24:00 PM
You paint a scene that is quite touching--the world is full of such sorrow--powerful message you convey my friend.. in your usual artistic style that resonates.
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Date: 6/10/2020 2:21:00 PM
Your words reach the deepest corners of heart Nette. Love the message. God bless you :)
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Date: 6/10/2020 10:30:00 AM
Heartwarmingly delivered. Those who have less in life are the kindest!
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