Kindness

kindness in his voice or was it the depth of his eyes posted on August 11, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/12/2018 10:12:00 PM

I am sure it was a little of both.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 11:14:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Warren Doll

Date: 8/12/2018 10:11:00 AM

Beautiful senryu, Line So much captured and expressed in just 12 words, Well done!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks, Warren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

James Inman

Date: 8/12/2018 9:25:00 AM

In a simple short write you have captured both the tenderness and passion of your attraction. It seems to me it's both, and likely many other things.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, James. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2018 6:48:00 PM

wow, I love this, Line. They eyes HAVE it

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 9:19:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/11/2018 4:58:00 PM

Often when we look deep into someone's eyes, they tell their own story. The heart is never far behind that story Line. Thank you for sharing your luminous lines, You are brilliant

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 5:11:00 PM

Thanks for meeting me half way, Pixie. I always say these short forms are an interplay with the reader otherwise the poem falls flat. Love your comments.