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At age 38, I found myself jobless, near-peniless, and near-hopeless.  A great man asked me the questions in this poem --- How are your elbows? How are your wrists? How are your fingers? How are your fists?  When I realized how healthy I was, I managed to get my life back on track in a hurry!

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So, my friend, world got you down a bit, eh?
Things just aren't going your way?
~ Well, how are your elbows? 

And how are your wrists?  How are your fingers?
How are your fists?  --O.K., you say?
Thought so!  Have a nice day!

It's all about perspective, sleepyhead
Wake up!  Quit your complaining!
~ Count your blessings instead!

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Date: 8/10/2018 3:29:00 AM
What a great thought to start the day with, Gershon. To count our blessings and make each day count. Thank you for the wonderful comments I woke up to this morning on the forum! I find your poetry inspirational and value such remarks. I shall however be keeping my Sphynx well away from your feral female femme fatale!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2018 1:04:00 PM
Gosh, thank you so much for such an encouraging comment! Gives me hope! And no problem with keeping Sphynx away from my feral female... Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/8/2018 11:01:00 PM
Reminds me of that saying "I was sad I had no shoes until I met a man with no feet" very sage advice here!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you for your instructive visit, Michelle! I'm glad you quoted that saying, as I'd forgotten all about it. It's always worthwhile keeping it in mind. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/7/2018 10:18:00 PM
An awesome and powerful poem, Gershon.. inspiration was what you needed - at the time you needed it most. A great write. Best wishes for a win my friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/8/2018 2:11:00 PM
Bravo to you, my friend.. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/8/2018 1:14:00 PM
You and the other Susan (Gentry) must be on the "Susan wavelength" or something. Both of you zeroed in so well on what transpired here. Bravo, Susan. ~ Gershon
Date: 8/7/2018 6:04:00 PM
Great advice. Sometimes somebody will say just the thing that will hit us at the right time. This happened to me, different words of course. What a gift he gave you and you are gifting us in this poem of few words that say so much. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/7/2018 7:44:00 PM
You really zeroed in on this one, Susan. It's exactly as you expressed it. Thanks for commenting. Very much appreciated! :) gw
Date: 8/7/2018 5:41:00 PM
this ROCKS!!!! (but oopsies if the person has a bad elbow, tendonitis and arthritic fingers)
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Date: 8/7/2018 7:43:00 PM
I like that "oopsies," Andrea! It's just so "there," if you know what I mean. Do you have any more of those in your arsenal? If so, please sling them at me!!! :) gw
Date: 8/7/2018 4:48:00 PM
A friend well met and well timed wise question - inspiration for all! Good luck this one's a winner already.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/7/2018 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you, Virginia, for your heartfelt comment. Best wishes always, Gershon
Date: 8/7/2018 4:28:00 PM
Great advice Gershon..love the message of proper perspective in life.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/7/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/7/2018 4:24:00 PM
don't know if this is true, but it's very good advice and definitely worth following. great poem, gershon...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/7/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thank you for your generous praise, Ilene. … And it's 100% true, actually. Those 4 questions and the realization they engendered helped me turn my life around a long time ago. Best wishes, Gershon
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