Kimo Therapy

sweet friend, feeling beyond devastated
  your bruised heart weak and beaten
     your body your worst foe

how I would love to take away your pain -
  fight...   can't let this swindle you
     of your spirit life too 

what I would give to replenish your soul
  with soothing serenity
     and see you smile once more



Posted on July 12, 2018 for contest KIMO THERAPY sponsored by CAROL CONNELL  -  RANKED 3RD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/15/2018 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Comforting and encouraging words as well as selfless.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/15/2018 11:39:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.
Date: 8/14/2018 8:19:00 AM
So warmly expressed, congrats on your win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/14/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/13/2018 5:31:00 PM
Loving and encouraging words. Well said. Congratulations.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 5:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Sian.
Date: 8/13/2018 5:26:00 PM
Very tender, encouraging and supportive words, Line. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/13/2018 7:31:00 PM
very sweetly encouraging, LIne! I wanted to tell you, I may be headed for a "solution" to MY woes. Will tell you if it works out!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/15/2018 4:21:00 PM
I will SoupMail you.
Date: 7/13/2018 5:31:00 AM
Line, you can feel the empathetic pathos in your write and the impossible desire to some how make this wrong all right.. I love it!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/13/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, LM.
Date: 7/12/2018 2:03:00 PM
such a tender expression of trying to help a friend - good luck in the contest (but you probably don't need it!)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/12/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle. And we always can use luck.
Date: 7/12/2018 1:42:00 PM
- Touching ... lovely written, Line - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/12/2018 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/12/2018 8:58:00 AM
Line, you have expressed an infinite amount of caring and love in your Kimo. The title Kimo Therapy is brilliant. Well done! // Warren:)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/12/2018 11:22:00 AM
I wish I could take the credit but the title is from the brilliant mind of Carol Connell as per the new contest she is sponsoring. But thanks for the visit and comment, Warren. Line xx
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