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Killing Me Softly With Memories

Unleashed...- the beast of miracles at night - A silent roar of silk cuddled by the ocean breeze - Ephemeral synchrony of flesh from Heaven Rains thundered burgundy petals on maiden's tears. He frees her pony tail in uncontrollable cascades of sand pouring in a stubborn hourglass of lust The God of Whispers kisses her future memories along a naked path of a "Forget-Me-Not" bouquet... * "I'll never know where dawn vanished her nostalgic smile A soft Mirage - onto the desert of my selfish life..." by: iolanda scripca For Nette's Contest " Soft Sensuality"

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Date: 9/28/2011 8:15:00 PM
Powerful punchline... and quote. Thanks for the write and congrats!~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:03:00 PM
I see you won, Iolanda.congratulations. And knowing what you told me about where you live, I can see where you got your inspiration for this!!
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:45:00 PM
haha my luck made you win the contest haha
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:16:00 PM
What a great win you have here in Nette's "Soft Sensuality" contest, congratulations Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Iolanda
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:13:00 AM
What awesome images this has in it, Iolanda. gosh , how have you been?
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Date: 9/26/2011 8:07:00 PM
killing me softly is a song so i read this and loved it good luck in the contest
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