Daver Austin Poet Dodoitsu

Killer Combinations - Two Dodoitsu

KILLER COMBINATIONS
(two Dodoitsu)

Money isn’t everything
a vibrant smile might win her
or a very charming wit
but    poor    and    ugly?

Pork and beans – my undoing
a big plate of them for lunch
and this harmless little slip
then     she waltzed right in

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Elaine George February 8, 2011 at 1:46 AM You CRACK ME UP! Daver. I can't even write one of these. Love your style. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2011 at 12:27 PM Both are funny, Daver, but the second one had me laughing out loud. Isn't that the way it always happens -- silent but deadly. LOL Love, Carolyn

Elaine George January 19, 2011 at 8:22 AM Funny! My husband is also dealing with a sinus infection. It seems to be going around although they claim it isn't contagious. Lainie

James Peranteau January 17, 2011 at 4:53 AM How harmless was the "slip" dear poet?! This is really great Sir ! Funny ! much love, james

Sara Kendrick January 15, 2011 at 4:04 PM Good one, Daver...That might not win the girl but true love understands..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara

Audrey Haick January 15, 2011 at 2:02 PM Hilarious Dave! You have a great sense of humor... Hope your weekend's fun! ...Always, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2011 at 1:38 PM oops,keep forgetting. this is a 7!

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2011 at 1:27 PM hahahhaa, So I inspired this witty double dodoitsu? Why thank ee. Now get busy and write some more!! (the second stanza made me think of a really funny story one of my students told us in an essay about most embarrassing moments!) Luv, Andrea