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Killer-Hunt

Darkness fall's the killer awake's pull's on his boot's time to hunt the killer has an evil siniser twisted mind no feeling's, no moral's, no regret's just self-satisfaction total gradifaction the family of victim's he hurt never come's to mind he awaken's in a drunken -drug vision time to hunt

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Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/22/2012 4:10:00 AM

Dark... Nice... Terry

Bradley Cox
Date: 8/22/2012 7:03:00 AM

thank you terry

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/21/2012 11:50:00 PM

Interesting write. Try not to use apostrophes when you pluralize nouns and use verbs conjugated in third-person singular present tense. Apostrophes should only be used when a genitive or possessive case is present. Also, there is no such word as "gradifaction". I believe you wanted to use "gratification" in that line. In your third line, "siniser" should be "sinister".

Bradley Cox
Date: 8/22/2012 12:32:00 AM

Robert, thank you for reading and sharing with me it will help me become alot better thank you!