Get Your Premium Membership

Kidnapping You

Kidnapped I plan to kidnap you~though you are a fully grown man. I hold for you, a bag of sweets… My heart's sweetest confections and then... Get you into my car and into a dark, thick forest. There, my deepest love... To please you to the fullest. So you just can't leave me. Beyond any measure, my dearest love treasure. In the woods, near a sparling stream, Timeless,we can settle and dream And at night lie under the stars Serene…under God's azure love blanket. 5/4/202$

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/7/2023 9:27:00 AM
This was lovely... so romantic... Ann
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2023 8:13:00 PM
Fun write Pangie…
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 11:53:00 PM
Glad you were here Fin ! Pangie
Date: 5/5/2023 6:57:00 PM
Watch the pine needles!!!
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 11:51:00 PM
Arlo! I can tell you have experience and/ or a great sense humor! Funster Forest Pangie
Date: 5/5/2023 11:21:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, you plan to kidnap him with treats, I hope you kidnaped the right person. Hugs. /Darlene\ xxx
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2023 3:40:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, yes that is true. Hugs. xxx/Darlene/
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 12:54:00 PM
Darlene! It is just a fantasy.for fun. I could kidnap no matter person. Not even a cat. Pangie xxooo
Date: 5/5/2023 9:54:00 AM
A creative/fun write. Watch out who you are kidnapping, you may not want them after all. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day/weekend..........
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 12:51:00 PM
You have a point. Paula..))) Thanks for being you. Woo Hoo Weekend too yoy~ Pangie
Date: 5/5/2023 8:54:00 AM
Hmmm. Anyone in particular on your mind Pangie my friend? A sweet write! :)
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 12:48:00 PM
Linda.how about Rob Scnitt grommet Newsmaxtv.co? Rob, thr throb. As you named him. Merci. Pangie
Date: 5/5/2023 7:03:00 AM
LOL…a bit dark, but surely meant to be sweet. Though, I really love this…I’m leaning in and saving this as a fave, Pangie!
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 12:57:00 PM
Kim….LOL Pangie. Thanks
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2023 9:36:00 AM
I thought so but still your poem stirs the imagination… <3 Kim
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 7:12:00 AM
Nothing dark LOL This is a sensual piem about intense desire written as a fantasy. The last four lines..,emphasize that. And as Jo said, it was a fun write, Merci ….passionate Pangie
Date: 5/5/2023 6:25:00 AM
Fun love write, Pangie:)
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/5/2023 6:28:00 AM
Than you Jo Pangie
Date: 5/4/2023 7:18:00 PM
OK, now that you've succeeded,... Can this kid take a nap?! ~ The Joker
Login to Reply
Romios Avatar
Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/4/2023 7:55:00 PM
Yes, you may.. Pangie

Book: Shattered Sighs