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Kicking Super Hero

From where l live I see a silly monster Trying to tiptoe and dive At you as if it`s a star Quickly I move in and check Then like a super hero I aim and really kick It into a screaming zero! (N.B For Carol Eastman`s Superhero contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/9/2015 6:47:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Date: 10/12/2014 5:13:00 PM
Dear Ndaba, you gave me a great laugh with this poem. I'm glad to see it placed in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/11/2014 9:13:00 AM
beautifully painted piece
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/11/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and words of encouragement.
Date: 10/10/2014 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/11/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thank you for your inspiring message.
Date: 10/9/2014 2:02:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Ndaba:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 10/11/2014 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Much appreciated!
Date: 10/4/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen.
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Date: 10/4/2014 10:31:00 AM
Good one, Ndaba...short and to the point...Hero style
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Date: 10/3/2014 1:11:00 PM
I like it :) a wonderful poem, I hope it did well in the contest. Best wishes, Juli-Michelle
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 10/3/2014 4:07:00 PM
Thank you, Juli-Michelle.
Date: 9/1/2014 1:57:00 PM
What a delight, Ndaba! We all need some superheroes in our lives. Maybe you can kick away some of the evil doers. Surely, Carol will enjoy your poem! Love, Carolyn
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 9/1/2014 6:25:00 AM
A fun and quirky super hero you have here. Love it! Thank you for your visit and comments on my poem.
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 6:31:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/1/2014 5:47:00 AM
Ironic view of heroes
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 9/1/2014 6:01:00 AM
Mario, thanks for reading my piece.
Date: 8/31/2014 9:06:00 AM
- Long time since I've seen you, Ndaba :) -Unique poem for the contest .... really well done! - Good luck - hope you win :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/31/2014 9:33:00 AM
Yes, long time, Anne. Thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 8/31/2014 4:56:00 AM
Toquyen, yes, superman rises to the occasion! Thank you for stopping by...
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Date: 8/31/2014 12:51:00 AM
Ooh, superman comes to the rescue lol. I like that :)
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Date: 8/30/2014 6:09:00 PM
lovely humour here:-) Hugs jan xx
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 8/30/2014 6:54:00 PM
Jan, thanks for stopping by.