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Kicking Super Hero

From where l live
I see a silly monster
Trying to tiptoe and dive 
At you as if it`s a star 
Quickly I move in and check
Then like a super hero
I aim and really kick 
It into a screaming zero!

(N.B For Carol Eastman`s 
 Superhero contest)

Copyright © Ndaba Sibanda | Year Posted 2014

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Funom Makama Date: 7/9/2015 6:47:00 AM This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/12/2014 5:13:00 PM Dear Ndaba, you gave me a great laugh with this poem. I'm glad to see it placed in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/11/2014 9:13:00 AM beautifully painted piece Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 10/11/2014 9:50:00 AM Thank you for your visit and words of encouragement.

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/10/2014 1:28:00 PM Congratulations on your HM Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 10/11/2014 9:08:00 AM Thank you for your inspiring message.

Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2014 2:02:00 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Ndaba:-) Hugs Jan xxxx Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 10/11/2014 9:18:00 AM Thank you, Jan. Much appreciated!

Ndaba Sibanda Date: 10/4/2014 10:53:00 AM Thank you, Eileen. Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/4/2014 10:31:00 AM Good one, Ndaba...short and to the point...Hero style Login to Reply

Juli- Michelle Date: 10/3/2014 1:11:00 PM I like it :) a wonderful poem, I hope it did well in the contest. Best wishes, Juli-Michelle Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 10/3/2014 4:07:00 PM Thank you, Juli-Michelle.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/1/2014 1:57:00 PM What a delight, Ndaba! We all need some superheroes in our lives. Maybe you can kick away some of the evil doers. Surely, Carol will enjoy your poem! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 9/1/2014 3:49:00 PM Thank you, Carolyn!

Monterey Sirak Date: 9/1/2014 6:25:00 AM A fun and quirky super hero you have here. Love it! Thank you for your visit and comments on my poem. Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 9/1/2014 6:31:00 AM Thanks for stopping by.

Mario De Paz Date: 9/1/2014 5:47:00 AM Ironic view of heroes Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 9/1/2014 6:01:00 AM Mario, thanks for reading my piece.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2014 9:06:00 AM - Long time since I've seen you, Ndaba :) -Unique poem for the contest .... really well done! - Good luck - hope you win :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 8/31/2014 9:33:00 AM Yes, long time, Anne. Thanks for your kind comments.

Ndaba Sibanda Date: 8/31/2014 4:56:00 AM Toquyen, yes, superman rises to the occasion! Thank you for stopping by... Login to Reply

Toquyen Harrell Date: 8/31/2014 12:51:00 AM Ooh, superman comes to the rescue lol. I like that :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/30/2014 6:09:00 PM lovely humour here:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Ndaba Sibanda Date: 8/30/2014 6:54:00 PM Jan, thanks for stopping by.