Ndaba Sibanda Poet Rhyme

Kicking Super Hero

From where l live
I see a silly monster
Trying to tiptoe and dive 
At you as if it`s a star 
Quickly I move in and check
Then like a super hero
I aim and really kick 
It into a screaming zero!

(N.B For Carol Eastman`s 
 Superhero contest)

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Funom Makama July 9, 2015 at 6:47 AM This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Carolyn Devonshire October 12, 2014 at 5:13 PM Dear Ndaba, you gave me a great laugh with this poem. I'm glad to see it placed in the contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Liam Mcdaid October 11, 2014 at 9:13 AM beautifully painted piece Ndaba Sibanda October 11, 2014 at 9:50 AM Thank you for your visit and words of encouragement.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 10, 2014 at 1:28 PM Congratulations on your HM Ndaba Sibanda October 11, 2014 at 9:08 AM Thank you for your inspiring message.

Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 2:02 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Ndaba:-) Hugs Jan xxxx Ndaba Sibanda October 11, 2014 at 9:18 AM Thank you, Jan. Much appreciated!

Ndaba Sibanda October 4, 2014 at 10:53 AM Thank you, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian October 4, 2014 at 10:31 AM Good one, Ndaba...short and to the point...Hero style

Juli- Michelle October 3, 2014 at 1:11 PM I like it :) a wonderful poem, I hope it did well in the contest. Best wishes, Juli-Michelle Ndaba Sibanda October 3, 2014 at 4:07 PM Thank you, Juli-Michelle.

Carolyn Devonshire September 1, 2014 at 1:57 PM What a delight, Ndaba! We all need some superheroes in our lives. Maybe you can kick away some of the evil doers. Surely, Carol will enjoy your poem! Love, Carolyn Ndaba Sibanda September 1, 2014 at 3:49 PM Thank you, Carolyn!

Monterey Sirak September 1, 2014 at 6:25 AM A fun and quirky super hero you have here. Love it! Thank you for your visit and comments on my poem. Ndaba Sibanda September 1, 2014 at 6:31 AM Thanks for stopping by.

Mario De Paz September 1, 2014 at 5:47 AM Ironic view of heroes Ndaba Sibanda September 1, 2014 at 6:01 AM Mario, thanks for reading my piece.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2014 at 9:06 AM - Long time since I've seen you, Ndaba :) -Unique poem for the contest .... really well done! - Good luck - hope you win :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ndaba Sibanda August 31, 2014 at 9:33 AM Yes, long time, Anne. Thanks for your kind comments.

Ndaba Sibanda August 31, 2014 at 4:56 AM Toquyen, yes, superman rises to the occasion! Thank you for stopping by...

Toquyen Harrell August 31, 2014 at 12:51 AM Ooh, superman comes to the rescue lol. I like that :)

Jan Allison August 30, 2014 at 6:09 PM lovely humour here:-) Hugs jan xx Ndaba Sibanda August 30, 2014 at 6:54 PM Jan, thanks for stopping by.