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KEYHOLE kept a secret from his kid. shades down on window. keyhole is tiny. eyes keen to glimpse world inside. kim's birthday gift. dad has knack for building things. A kickstand props up new bike! 3/9/2017 Pleiades K contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2017 5:01:00 PM

I like your unique take on your chosen 'keyhole' theme, Kim, and you even managed to include your name:) gl in the contest. // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2017 5:04:00 PM

Thanks, Paul :)

Roy Pett

Date: 3/9/2017 5:02:00 PM

Brilliant Pleiades Kim, you have made this task look easy, well written, good luck in the contest, Roy. :))

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 7:36:00 PM

Thank you, Roy!

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/9/2017 2:50:00 PM

This is a sweet story and cleverly written, too, Kim! Good luck in the contest :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Laura!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2017 12:48:00 PM

- A great one, Kim - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Janis Thompson

Date: 3/9/2017 12:36:00 PM

Well done Kim. GL in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 12:46:00 PM

Thanks, Janis!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/9/2017 12:08:00 PM

Oh how clever Kim what precious memories:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 12:46:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/9/2017 11:01:00 AM

Huzzah! Sweet write ;) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 12:47:00 PM

Thanks, Maureen!

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 3/9/2017 10:41:00 AM

So cute, loved it Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thank you, Sara! :)

Chris Green

Date: 3/9/2017 10:14:00 AM

Very good Kim. K, the perfect Pleiades letter for someone named Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2017 10:15:00 AM

LOL!!