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Key Giver of Blooms

As drizzle pours into an hour and another I glimpse through the wide hole of a skyscape... Frame by frame, vignettes from adolescence emerge Where Mother plants new seeds—nettle, dahlia, herb-- Our backyard almost evergreen despite rain, Tending the aisle of growing shoots with care: And I wonder...does my parent know I am watching When her delicate face ripens amid gale’s blow? All at once, keynotes of life trail like a strained note Her bent hands tilting up, pained, to taste the dew: O those eyes dotted in Braille...weary, impaired By sun-struck years overrun through ceaseless toil In our garden’s lawn, paddling the holes On marshy rails with interludes of blissful tunes, Unmindful a visual sense wanes, stripping An impassioned ritual to be left unsung: Yet, it seems all the foliage knows her touch... She, the key giver of root’s bloom. 1/18/2019 For John Lawless: Slap The Muse And Turn It Loose
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Halliday Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 3:17 AM
I felt Soul in your writing. Nicely done. Mark
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Congrats on your top win, nette. Bravo.
Sands Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 2:00 PM
This is so nice! Well written Nette! :)
One Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 9:03 AM
Wow, so many wonderful lines to this poem... Very deep and full of meaningful lines..
Sharp Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 1:09 AM
This has an underlying poignancy, and is quite beautifully written.
Raven Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Hi Nette, this is a wonderful write you share from your pen. Myself, I am death to a garden, everything I touch gives up the ghost. I do admire people who have that green thumb and can bring beauty from nothing. A beautiful write. I read this excellent peace and I remember my own mother, sitting in the garden, enjoying the sun. Your piece kicks off such wonderful memories for me. I hope this excellent write does well for you in the contest. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 2:59 PM
- Definitely a beautiful garden, lovely written Nette - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 2:26 PM
It appears she has a green thump, lovely entry Nette, winning wishes.
Devonshire Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 11:57 AM
Though I couldn't figure out what John was seeking in his contest, your lovely poem reminds me of the dedication so many women have to their gardens. My mother was like yours, Nette. She had that magic touch with plants and it was fitting that she died in the garden she'd spent so much of her life tending. Beautifully written! Best wishes in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Some have special green touch..anything they grow blooms..just like your poem.
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