Keola: Sonnet

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*Image of Clock Time Dove by Pixabay. Keola: Sonnet "Most people would sooner die than think, in fact, they do," ... Bertrand Russell (Quote hidden within the Sonnet in Italics Most of the time when I'm under the sun, ought not to watch nor pass by on people, befuddled about clock-glued eyes outrun, a zenith star would climb o'er the steeple. Sooner all will suspect that life's too brief, plus, die surrounds confidence merits life. I've improved rather than grasp my belief, and think I got the choice result fehl strife. Confuse not in the consequence head-on, direct my route, let that star point beyond, a scale that exacts stealthily who's drawn, bargain heightened the fact I did respond. I discovered they who do take time, plans to firmly coil, so to turn the clock's hands. *fehl: fault; flaw; failure 2021 December 06

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2022 12:49:00 PM

another great example.. lovly write

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/6/2022 12:59:00 PM

Thanks again, Eve, Aloha~William

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 1/31/2022 4:07:00 PM

William, this is both brilliant and beautiful! I love that my introduction to this type of poetry is by reading yours. I'm both mesmerized and inspired! Excellent job! Much love...Meghan.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/31/2022 7:02:00 PM

Wondrously appropriated words that magnify through exaltation, Meghan. My family and I thank you from the bottom of our hearts my friend, Aloha!

Craig Cornish

Date: 1/31/2022 11:17:00 AM

Hi William, did you mean passed in line 2--I've done the same

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/31/2022 11:33:00 AM

THANKS, Craig, my proofreader is my two-yr-old grandson, you think I need help? (Not in front of the kid--LOL!)

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/31/2022 1:52:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing wise message midst the poetic structure, exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/31/2022 2:04:00 AM

Much appreciated, Beata, as TPS waddles on the concept for souper's inability to submit their new-fangled ideas, I say, throw it out there and let soupers give it a try my friend, Aloha!