Keepsake - Paper Money

grandma gave paper money, I didn't spend
        fragrance of her touch I saved
           up there in stars she lives...







April 6, 2017.
Form K - Kimo - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings
Syllables: 10 /7 /6
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La France Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Meenakshi congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice Kimo. I really like it.
Raina Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Thanks for liking it......
Kimathi Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Deep, sincere, and emotional piece..... Congrats Meenakshi, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Raina Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Thank you Teddy...
Michaels Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 2:34 AM
Aaww that's so sweet. The value of that fragrant currency is higher than the monetary amount. One of my favourites! Well done on your high-placed win!
Raina Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Thank you John...I do posses a currency note which was given by an old lady, she is no more now ( was like my grandma) and I never used it.....it brings back her memories...
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 10:00 PM
What a sweet poem and I am the first to comment? Oh, I love this, Meenakshi. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Raina Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Andrea....
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