Keeping up with the Joneses, who are weird

Because I'd been good for a very long while,
my parents decided to buy me a crocodile.
Then all the kids on the block
thought I really did rock.
Till two weeks later,
another kid’s parents decided to buy him an alligator!
Shoot! And now some kid’s braggin’
his parents are gonna buy him a Komodo dragon.
Oh, my God! This is way over the top!
Will this neighborhood competition never stop?
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Gifford Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 11:22 PM
Hello Marinus, this is a lovely piece and an enjoyable read. Enjoy your day.
Jansen Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Thanks, Zyrool. Glad you liked it. :-)
Pulver Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 2:29 PM
This was a very cute poem it made me laugh!
Jansen Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, Marisa. Laughter is good, right?
Kaufman Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 1:17 PM
LOL..very cute, enjoyed..
Jansen Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 4:39 PM
Thanks for taking the time to comment, Nancy. It means a lot. :-)
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