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"Look through the misty fog" --quote by poet

They painted an aesthetic portrait
                    of contentment and prosperity
                           for the outside world.
                 A popular, well-to-do man and wife 
                festooned and held up to a pedestal 
                          as an ideal married couple.

           They were coined a "match made in heaven"
                   by their sizeable circle of friends.
                       Often waving at neighbors 
                    behind a picket fence, in front of
                 their gorgeous, newly built cape cod;
                  they live what seems like a fairytale.

               Ah, the good life!  The American dream!
                    All seems happy and hunky-dory 
                  between them to casual observers, 
                          but it's all an illusion. 
                     Their bright smiles, a mask 
                       to conceal an awful truth, 

                 a beautifully constructed facade.
                      Carefully hidden beneath 
                      the veneer of normalcy, 
               two broken people torn asunder 
                         by greed and acrimony.
                     There's no love or trust there.

                     A flawed union bedeviled 
                        by feelings of insecurity, 
                         squabbles over money, 
                    crippling debt, to name a few.
                        The state of their affairs 
                     couldn't be more imperfect.

                     They live in a house of cards 
                           with cracked walls 
                       and a shaky foundation.
                                 Eventually,
                   their house, their ersatz world,
                        will come crumbling down.


Writing Prompt- Flawed - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France
Words used: illusion, mask, facade, broken, torn, flawed, imperfect, cracked
Date written: 06/16/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/25/2021 4:36:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your excellent poem. Great use of the required words and I like your quote and image, peace _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/25/2021 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, the wonderful feedback and congratulations, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 6/24/2021 8:52:00 PM
An vividly portrayed narrative and so true too! Congrats on your win, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2021 8:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-)
Date: 6/24/2021 8:34:00 PM
Your works are really great. This is one of them. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2021 8:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)

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