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Keeping Order

On a back porch the feline sat
watching a busy sewer rat
while overhead a flying bat
diplomat of their habitat
observing preying pussycat
had to get even tit-for-tat
squealing he warned that sewer rat
it took off like a scared bobcat!


1-15-2020
First Time Here - Any Monorhyme Poetry Contest
William Kekaula

Copyright © M. L. Kiser | Year Posted 2020

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Lindsay Laurie Date: 1/17/2020 7:05:00 PM Hello M. L. … nicely written M. L. Flows nicely indeed - thanks M. L. - Lindsay Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 2:08:00 AM Thank you.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/17/2020 5:17:00 AM This monorhyme made me smile, giggle, laugh and do other amazing but fun things! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 2:08:00 AM Hmm...other amazing fun things?

Hilo Poet Date: 1/15/2020 3:16:00 PM I enjoyed your very witty well-penned poem and thank you for your participation, and my compliments on your 1st place win~@wk Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM Thank you so much.

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/15/2020 2:18:00 PM Beats TV every time! Well done! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM Thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/15/2020 2:10:00 PM Hello M.L.Kiser, i am glad that the rat took off when he saw the cat. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM Lol, thanks Darlene.

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/15/2020 1:06:00 PM 'diplomat of their habitat' strikes a nice chord! Thanks, M.L. :) gw Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM Thank you.

Line Gauthier Date: 1/15/2020 10:45:00 AM Fun monorhyme, ML. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/18/2020 2:10:00 AM Thank you.

Eve Roper Date: 1/15/2020 7:40:00 AM Great Monorhyme, perfect for the contest, good luck. Eve Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/15/2020 8:07:00 AM Thanks Eve.

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/15/2020 7:12:00 AM Beautifully painted--bat, rat, and cat all come alive to cheer for your win--excellent write, MLK. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/15/2020 7:27:00 AM Thanks Vijay, thought I'd have a bit of fun.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/15/2020 5:52:00 AM A fun poem MLK, Best wishes in the contest my friend. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/15/2020 7:10:00 AM Thanks, I'm a big dingy this morning. Glad you enjoyed it.