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On a back porch the feline sat watching a busy sewer rat while overhead a flying bat diplomat of their habitat observing preying pussycat had to get even tit-for-tat squealing he warned that sewer rat it took off like a scared bobcat!
1-15-2020 First Time Here - Any Monorhyme Poetry Contest William Kekaula

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Date: 1/17/2020 7:05:00 PM
Hello M. L. … nicely written M. L. Flows nicely indeed - thanks M. L. - Lindsay
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2020 2:08:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/17/2020 5:17:00 AM
This monorhyme made me smile, giggle, laugh and do other amazing but fun things!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2020 2:08:00 AM
Hmm...other amazing fun things?
Date: 1/15/2020 3:16:00 PM
I enjoyed your very witty well-penned poem and thank you for your participation, and my compliments on your 1st place win~@wk
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 1/15/2020 2:18:00 PM
Beats TV every time! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/15/2020 2:10:00 PM
Hello M.L.Kiser, i am glad that the rat took off when he saw the cat. have a nice day my friend.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM
Lol, thanks Darlene.
Date: 1/15/2020 1:06:00 PM
'diplomat of their habitat' strikes a nice chord! Thanks, M.L. :) gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2020 2:09:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/15/2020 10:45:00 AM
Fun monorhyme, ML.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/18/2020 2:10:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/15/2020 7:40:00 AM
Great Monorhyme, perfect for the contest, good luck. Eve
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2020 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 1/15/2020 7:12:00 AM
Beautifully painted--bat, rat, and cat all come alive to cheer for your win--excellent write, MLK.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, thought I'd have a bit of fun.
Date: 1/15/2020 5:52:00 AM
A fun poem MLK, Best wishes in the contest my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2020 7:10:00 AM
Thanks, I'm a big dingy this morning. Glad you enjoyed it.

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