Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

Keep You Posted

KEEP YOU POSTED

Getting back on my feet again
Show me the end, show me the end
Give me a road to follow
I will throw you a passage or two

Get yourself right, get out my face
I need a new way, I need a new way
An easy way to start my day
All though I can't get enough of you 
There are times you are in my way

Our hearts don't beat as one
Call me a fool,
I set my foot down 
I keep you as my friends, no rules

Tomorrow will be another day
Do not give in to me
We are still both fish in the sea
Stuffy stuff, you got me at suffocate 
We do not relate
Still I love you

How else can this be fetched out
If I reel you in, sometimes I need you my friend
Stop putting yourself in doubt
This has no end

Don't get yourself all worked out
It will be me and you, a sweet walk on the beach
I see nothing wrong in deceiving you
I'm so funny, I'll have you sticking around like a leech

How many times do I have to push and shove
My feeling are troubled, but in love
Until then my love, 
I will keep you posted

By;PD

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Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2014 at 12:24 AM a poem of yours that I really like back here. Thanks for your comments today, PD. Hope you are doing ok.

Cynthia Ferguson June 27, 2014 at 2:54 AM what confliction, my you are a thinker, it all went so well. I am amazed how well you did that, it is so awesome .:)

Richard Tarr June 27, 2014 at 12:05 AM I enjoyed reading this. I'm the one always waiting to be posted.

Jeremy Street June 26, 2014 at 6:38 PM *.* Keep Me Posted Girl! |*:*\

Casarah Nance June 26, 2014 at 4:46 PM I can relate, sometimes the love isn't the love the other person wants it to be, and well things just get all silly in a relationship, anyhow girl, this was featured first so yay awesome. smile girl. xox

Ken Jordan June 26, 2014 at 10:11 AM Keep you posted?....I don't think so, life goes on period, end of story. Be careful of what you're saying when you say, "I love you." For love is eternal, there are no options to leave when love is in your heart.....Jesus, loved us so much, he died so that we may live, their's no greater love than that. DA, reality says that you never loved him, and he likewise. just let go and let God, guide your way. Namaste

Gordon Mcconnell June 25, 2014 at 10:37 AM great piece of work Linda, superbly penned. well done, God bless, Gordon

Harry Horsman December 20, 2012 at 3:11 PM Oh yes, nobody fools around with our PD, like this, like this a lot...

Joe Maverick August 13, 2012 at 2:41 PM Oh well theres such a lot to say about this one P D.. But then I'd probably only spoil it; so I'll just put a lid on my ideas.." and let everyone alone to enjoy it.."

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2012 at 8:00 AM Sad that in life we do get toasted sometimes..Enjoyed reading this morn..I tried to find something on which I had not commented..Walla...Thanks so much on your honoring my work to be in a honorary place of winners' circle..I hope that your day is great..It looks like rain here again in Georgia with that damp air which isn't too cold but damp...Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2011 at 10:16 AM And what I couldn't say over at that poem. I LOVED the last stanza,which was all you. About this one here, I had not seen it before either unless my comment was deleted by Soup. (are they deleting more than one page of responses now underneath our poems?) hmmm, this one was written over a year ago, so I am wondering who it might be? Not nathan I think! Who is it you will "keep posted?"

Wilma Neels May 27, 2010 at 6:32 AM absolutely love it!! makes me think of a friendship that went wrong lol ;) Wilma

Gert W. Knop May 21, 2010 at 4:50 AM You wrote a heartfelt and true poem with this, P.D.! Great write! Thank you for all your comments and have a great weekend...Gert

Susan Mills May 18, 2010 at 1:01 PM it's my feeling that often soulmates have a hard time being togehter here on earth. Just a thought that arises from your analytical love poem. Very interesting... keep posting. Susan

Royal Trevino May 17, 2010 at 10:29 PM wow, such good writing, don't know how you manage it lol, keep it up as usual, Royal

Lynette Chachere May 15, 2010 at 5:51 PM lol. you two are clearly great poet sweet hearts.i mean friends.ha ha.like are you his wife? jk jk.just messing around, i still don't know what you are. saying random stuff.don't listen to that. also, im glad you liked my narrative so much to favorite it.that encourages me. because i didn't think it was that good at all really.thats why i didn't post it until 2 months after.lovely slam poem.lol.keep it posted P.D. -Always&Forever Lynette

Doris Culverhouse May 14, 2010 at 4:01 AM enjoyed reading your works today, I have been so busy this week and feeling sorry for myself. I will be better though.

John Loving Iii May 12, 2010 at 9:17 AM cold but truthful. i have one of those. and i never said i love you but have been told. i suppose i have my own way of saying i'll keep you posted. or several versions. but one day i'll pay, i'm sure of it. john

Ravindra K Kapoor May 11, 2010 at 8:26 PM It’s a beautiful write, very coolly penned and slammed. Expressions are sweet bouncing of your thoughts, puzzling your mind my friend. I have placed part 3 & 4 of the Patradoot or The Messenger. Love and best wishes.... Ravindra..... Poet D

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 11, 2010 at 7:39 PM Ingenious P.D. BBF and honest yet cool like your style... appreciate your great comments today on my poetry...luv.. your BBF ... the "Sweetheart"

James Fraser May 11, 2010 at 2:15 PM Apt title for a poem, and a beaut at that. Koolio piece PD, i enjoyed this one >> James

Andrew Crisci May 11, 2010 at 10:41 AM I have enjoyed your honest, and somewhat funny slam. Honesty is a virtue of the soul as truth is. Sometimes, we need banality in our lives to break away from boredom. I wish you continued success. Admiringly, Andrew.

Jay Loveless May 11, 2010 at 10:14 AM i like this. some of these are a bit hard to follow at the moment but only because my eyes dont want to stay awake. nice work here.

Billy Thekidster May 11, 2010 at 2:46 AM I didn't even bother to read the above crap. Just wanted to drop by and say hello.........and screw with ya a bit. theKidster WASN'T Here BM-All Rights Reserved MMD

Charmaine Chircop May 10, 2010 at 10:44 PM Hhahaaa..Funny poem ,keep us posted...We'll be waiting..Charma

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