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Keep the 'Change'

Can the world enunciate its feelings towards a volatile emptiness If we dared to visualize the frothing of inevitability's smile would it be enough Would the barriers, constructed by animosity's lament, listen to reason if dollar signs didn't taste so lustfully acidic How could we learn to build, if all we did was preach false pretenses If it is said that chasing your dreams would cost you dearly, why can't “wisdom” be soulfully freed of leather whipped wallets and just show us the way Could past-tensed smiles of the poor & meek, really embrace the poorly meek, presently? Does the alleged understanding of a broken, budgetary embrace, matter when they screw elaborated currencies? If their heart was in the right place, why do their crossed fingers point left...behind When will mind over matter, matter? If our veritable presence is welcomed with open arms, why would it be removed before one could say goodbye? Another "check", bounced... ...keep your "change". ©D.J.E.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/18/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thought provoking and fiery Drake.. Splendid end to this gem :)
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Poet Tacito
Date: 4/19/2016 10:34:00 AM
:D I'm all about that fire. Thank you, thank you, Wilma. :D
Date: 4/4/2016 3:01:00 AM
Very political and hard-hitting for the state of humanity, presently. Love the way your mind works. "Does the alleged understanding of a broken, budgetary embrace, matter when they screw elaborated currencies" ... I watched a video on the inside "scoop" of how the Federal Reserve works, and let me tell you, Charles Ponzi has nothing on that sorry mess. "When will mind over matter, matter?" You pour out frustration while simultaneously educate and make me reflect. You're an all-arounder, Drake.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 4/19/2016 10:34:00 AM
Yeah, I never even thought about that perspective of my writing. That's quite true though. I seldom talk about political ANYTHING as it's no good for my youthful skin. Thank you so much, Tim! :D
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/4/2016 3:03:00 AM
I remember seeing "keep the change" ads after Obama became president, so I assumed it was gonna be about that. But it turned out to be much more interesting.
Date: 4/3/2016 3:26:00 PM
You play with words...oh how you play... love those two lines about the past-tensed smiles...incredible placement of words and concept play. You rock. Then that grand finale...
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Poet Tacito
Date: 4/3/2016 11:25:00 PM
:D THANK YOU, THANK YOU, Eileen.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things