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Keep Him Waiting

Keep Him Waiting… He can’t be without natural occurrence Like fog in the morning Or seasons reoccurring And you’re one to cast illusions Of what you want in that very moment Then once he gives you what you’re asking You slip from consciousness And keep him waiting

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Date: 1/13/2019 7:33:00 AM
I like how you begin and end with waiting. Have you considered adding "..." to "And keep him waiting"
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