Keep Control If You Can

We’ll be on the road all day long today Driving separately, racing Both of us want control

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/26/2018 8:52:00 PM

Wow! A completely awesome write, Caren. I love the feeling of tension your words create in your poem describing a battle of wills. Excellent and enjoyed. Warmest wishes. ~ Susan

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2018 3:34:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Sometimes these just roll off my pen because of the honesty in them.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/26/2018 8:54:00 AM

Good one Caren, when I retired we decided to just have one car, big mistake lol. Tom

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/26/2018 2:23:00 PM

Funny how you instinctively knew, Tom, this is me and my husband.

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2018 7:49:00 AM

ooooh.... nice one Karen... Who won you or him?

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/26/2018 2:24:00 PM

I always win, Silent One. Be assured of that. ALWAYS.