Karma

Puppy love cheated,now, fat, bald... for Linda-Marie Bariana's contest: "First Love"

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/3/2010 11:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win dearest Iolanda,don't know how i missed this ,this is funny,hahahanha:)I'm happy He;s fat and bald if he cheated,lol.. Hope he gets fatter:)and balder:)..Charma

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/27/2010 9:49:00 PM

Interesting Epigram, Iolanda. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on The power of Love, part 2. I check it out again and agree with you, so I changed it back to the original form of Choka. Thanks again, Caroline.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2010 5:22:00 PM

i bet you laugh at him now, karma what a game of pay backs,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/26/2010 4:33:00 PM

SOUP MAIL INSTRUCTIONS ..TWO...luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 9:30:00 PM

SOUP MAIL... and hope all is well with u now..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/24/2010 5:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Iolanda. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2010 9:22:00 PM

congratulations, and it sounds like he got his just desserts! (did you mean bald maybe!) I hope so!! Luv, andrea

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/23/2010 8:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ,,great Epigram and thank you for visiting my words and leaving yours behind,,,Blessings..Cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 5:31:00 PM

Congrats Iolanda on your HM in my "First Love" contest with this cute and funny Epigram..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Skat A

Date: 4/23/2010 4:18:00 AM

Love that what comes around, ha ha, good luck in the contest,,Irma

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/23/2010 3:38:00 AM

Very funny Epigram, Iolanda! Enjoyed reading it and wish you good luck in the contest. Thank you for stopping by and commenting my poems..Have a nice weekend...Gert

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 11:03:00 PM

Good luck in the contest