Kansas Winds

wind chimes go crazy all bird feeders a kilter those squirrel devils

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Virginia Gelok

Date: 3/31/2021 8:01:00 PM

I just can't keep my feeder ful for this very reason. Cute

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2021 8:07:00 PM

I know. They are out there waiting for me right now.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/31/2021 8:00:00 PM

The wind can be pretty stiff around here too. Good job Caren . Love the imagery. God Bless, JB

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2021 8:08:00 PM

Thank you Judy for stopping by.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/31/2021 8:11:00 AM

lol

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2021 7:20:00 PM

They are out there robbing the feeders all night.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/31/2021 5:45:00 AM

Nice Haiku Caren. It shows it well :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2021 7:20:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/30/2021 7:31:00 PM

Perhaps one of those Kansas twisters might lift your house to the Land of Oz! Nicely written haiku.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2021 7:21:00 PM

I doubt it. We live in an earth-sheltered home. We are built into the side of a hill with only three feet sticking up in the back. Our house is concrete; a basement with a roof.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/30/2021 7:15:00 PM

Caren, you capture Nature's windy, whimsical and mischievous ways wonderfully. Great haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2021 7:21:00 PM

Thank you Susan. I usually get a haiku "wrong" so I am glad I got one "write" ; now I know it is.