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Where would I end up and what would I do if I clicked up my heels and relaxed? I'd let Aslan lick me and grabbed by the scruff of my neck I'd fly with Tinkerbell and Alice Cooper battily blooming like Asimov's universes flaming the tongues of the misbegotten and the misbecomed winding up in my own bed comforted. Yep. That's where I'd end up and that's what I'd do if I relaxed and clicked up my heels. --- "Close your eyes and click your heels" by Nancy Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/31/2011 1:20:00 PM
I love the descriptions and visualizations! With that imagination you could very well do all that and be in your own bed! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/31/2011 12:10:00 PM
And watching "Time Bandits." Good one Nancy. Tony
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:25:00 AM
I don't know if the contest has been judged yet or not..This is a very alive work filled with brief glimpses of movies and books..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 8/31/2011 12:27:00 AM
this is very strange, but I really like it!! Just reads really fun! My blue camara was SO sweet and from the days when the front hood was so big and wide. AHHHH, how I miss it!!
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:20:00 PM
What a wild ride this poem takes the reader on! Alice Cooper was interviewed the other day on a NY radio station. Thanks for your kind words on the elegy I wrote. Peace and Love Matthew Anish
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