Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Kaleidoscope Eyes

My eyes, some days, a flirty blue,
wink cerulean skies at you.
Let’s dally in sun’s gilded rays.
A flirty blue, my eyes - some days.

At evening time my eyes flash bright
as emeralds in sultry night.
Come bathe with me in passion’s clime.
My eyes flash bright at evening time.

Romantic eyes, with whisper of
soft lavender for one I love.
In gossamer, I’ll mesmerize
with whisper of romantic eyes.

In early morn, a green, pearl-gray
reflects your face in velvet day.
This placid hue my eyes were born-
a green, pearl-gray in early morn.

(My eyes actually change color with the contact lenses I choose to wear

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Sandra Haight May 22, 2018 at 4:56 PM Love how you can change your eyes, Andrea! And the wonderful imagery of them in your poem! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Edward Ibeh May 20, 2018 at 8:27 AM Brilliant poem, Andrea. Congratulations on a fine win!:-)

Susan Gentry May 19, 2018 at 10:49 PM Congratulations on your win with this clever poem, refreshing read.

Line Gauthier May 19, 2018 at 9:08 PM A fun and delightfully colourful poem, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Richard Lamoureux December 10, 2016 at 1:25 PM What beautiful eyes you have. Congrats on your win.

Jean Murray December 9, 2016 at 7:06 AM The eyes have it...windows to the soul. Congratulations Andrea.

Francis J Grasso December 9, 2016 at 6:08 AM Great take on this contest, Andrea! I love it!. Congratulations! ...Fran

Lewis Raynes December 8, 2016 at 9:43 PM Congratulations on ur win Andrea, great poem

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 14, 2016 at 6:01 AM I love this one. I like to just randomly pick a poem sometimes and this truly was a gem of a pick. I love your rhyming pattern, the meter, it was just long enough...though (and I'm not a big fan of long poetry) I could have read a couple more stanzas. Tremendous artistry here...Excellent! 7 and a Fav Poem...! MC

Poet Destroyer A July 24, 2015 at 6:05 PM ANDREA. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 22, 2015 at 2:48 AM Brilliant write Andrea, congrats on ur win!

Eve Roper July 21, 2015 at 10:42 PM A lot of color for the right mood congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Alexis Y. July 21, 2015 at 9:05 PM Andrea, this is beautiful and romantic.The title alone caught my attention. When l started reading I was not disappointed. My fav line: Early in the morn , a green, pearl -gray reflects your face in velvet day. Excellent job! Congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis

Lee Carter July 21, 2015 at 8:43 AM Great title! I love it congrats : )

Viv Wigley July 20, 2015 at 9:25 PM Ha! Caught me with the last line! What a great idea- different Andreas; to quote Forrest Gump, "ya never know what ya gonna get". oooooh..... great write, my lady. Viv x

Jan Allison July 20, 2015 at 2:40 PM Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A July 20, 2015 at 2:39 PM ANDREA, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE

John Lawless July 20, 2015 at 2:37 PM Well Andrea it beats scanning the bar through the bottom of an empty shot glass. Nicely written whisper.

Casarah Nance July 20, 2015 at 2:07 PM Change is good, colorful and creative :)

Suzanne C. Goudreau October 23, 2014 at 8:51 PM Wow, so breathtakingly beautiful. I can picture those beautiful eyes reflecting plenty of love! Very moving. I must say, you are so so talented!

Gail Roberts October 18, 2014 at 12:25 PM Another gem

Heather Ober October 10, 2014 at 2:27 PM Beautiful! How I have missed reading your poetry!

M. L. Kiser October 7, 2014 at 1:10 PM Well done! Nice idea re. the contacts.

Monterey Sirak October 4, 2014 at 8:51 AM Oh, so you're the....Girl with kaleidoscope eyes....I always wondered who the Beatles were singing about. Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2014 at 11:35 PM well, maybe I could be that girl. I am older than the song. hahaah

Eileen Manassian October 3, 2014 at 9:19 PM Woman!!!! You are fabulous! FLAWLESS, I tell you....NO HITCH ANYWHERE! :) Loved this swap quatrain. Andrea...you rock! I see a win!

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