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Kaleidoscope Eyes

My eyes, some days, a flirty blue, wink cerulean skies at you. Let’s dally in sun’s gilded rays. A flirty blue, my eyes - some days. At evening time my eyes flash bright as emeralds in sultry night. Come bathe with me in passion’s clime. My eyes flash bright at evening time. Romantic eyes, with whisper of soft lavender for one I love. In gossamer, I’ll mesmerize with whisper of romantic eyes. In early morn, a green, pearl-gray reflects your face in velvet day. This placid hue my eyes were born- a green, pearl-gray in early morn. (My eyes actually change color with the contact lenses I choose to wear

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Date: 5/22/2018 4:56:00 PM
Love how you can change your eyes, Andrea! And the wonderful imagery of them in your poem! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/20/2018 8:27:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Andrea. Congratulations on a fine win!:-)
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Date: 5/19/2018 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this clever poem, refreshing read.
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Date: 5/19/2018 9:08:00 PM
A fun and delightfully colourful poem, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/10/2016 1:25:00 PM
What beautiful eyes you have. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/9/2016 7:06:00 AM
The eyes have it...windows to the soul. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 12/9/2016 6:08:00 AM
Great take on this contest, Andrea! I love it!. Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 12/8/2016 9:43:00 PM
Congratulations on ur win Andrea, great poem
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Date: 10/14/2016 6:01:00 AM
I love this one. I like to just randomly pick a poem sometimes and this truly was a gem of a pick. I love your rhyming pattern, the meter, it was just long enough...though (and I'm not a big fan of long poetry) I could have read a couple more stanzas. Tremendous artistry here...Excellent! 7 and a Fav Poem...! MC
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Date: 7/24/2015 6:05:00 PM
ANDREA. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
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Date: 7/22/2015 2:48:00 AM
Brilliant write Andrea, congrats on ur win!
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Date: 7/21/2015 10:42:00 PM
A lot of color for the right mood congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:05:00 PM
Andrea, this is beautiful and romantic.The title alone caught my attention. When l started reading I was not disappointed. My fav line: Early in the morn , a green, pearl -gray reflects your face in velvet day. Excellent job! Congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:43:00 AM
Great title! I love it congrats : )
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Date: 7/20/2015 9:25:00 PM
Ha! Caught me with the last line! What a great idea- different Andreas; to quote Forrest Gump, "ya never know what ya gonna get". oooooh..... great write, my lady. Viv x
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:40:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:39:00 PM
ANDREA, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:37:00 PM
Well Andrea it beats scanning the bar through the bottom of an empty shot glass. Nicely written whisper.
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:07:00 PM
Change is good, colorful and creative :)
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:51:00 PM
Wow, so breathtakingly beautiful. I can picture those beautiful eyes reflecting plenty of love! Very moving. I must say, you are so so talented!
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Date: 10/18/2014 12:25:00 PM
Another gem
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful! How I have missed reading your poetry!
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:10:00 PM
Well done! Nice idea re. the contacts.
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Date: 10/4/2014 8:51:00 AM
Oh, so you're the....Girl with kaleidoscope eyes....I always wondered who the Beatles were singing about.
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Date: 10/4/2014 11:35:00 PM
well, maybe I could be that girl. I am older than the song. hahaah
Date: 10/3/2014 9:19:00 PM
Woman!!!! You are fabulous! FLAWLESS, I tell you....NO HITCH ANYWHERE! :) Loved this swap quatrain. Andrea...you rock! I see a win!
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