Kalamatsch Premiere Contest Winner

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Kala is a skilled craft or performing art.

Matsch is mud in German and Kalamatsch Hamburg lingo.

Winnetou is an American Indian whose white friends Old Shatterhand and Sam Hawkins help and protect him.

Also the name of a book trilogy written by Karl May, whose adventures were concocted from library studies were the Harry Potter of my childhood in Germany.

 

 

Kalamatsch

As a kid I played with mud in pouring rain
                                     sand and water and hands no box required
we called it ‘kalamatsch’ quite crafty fun
                          as in kala and free play never reasoned or planned


~ Games ~


Cowboys and Indians followed later and
                                   luckily ‘Winnetou’ was the good protagonist
but then Karl May the resourceful author 
                               had never been to places he simply studied in 


~ Libraries ~


In the Army to my shame it was tactics and
                                    strategic endeavours with bad Russians the
scapegoats mocked in cold wars heating up
                                  little soldiers and regiments moved round in


~ The Sandbox ~


I renounced my allegiance as Hippies caught
                               up with me with flower power and grass roots
hair down to the hips rolling in the clouds and
                                muck of the times where right became wrong


~ Opposition is Duty ~


Che Guevara and Ho Chi Minh appealed when Mao 
                                              proposed to destroy what destroys us
when Marx and Freud knew it all and My Lai
                              glowed in agentic orange shadowed burns on her 


~ Skin ~


Beach holidays followed with grain and salt ocean
                            dunes foreshores boundless sex near the tide line
breeze in our hair winds of change repressed
                               and tormented boxed in and neglected adapted
   

~ Establishment ~


As life passes by and remembrance projects in
                             present and future the stenosis of sand timers
narrows regulated trickles turns oases to desert
                               low lands to flood plains and money to greed


~ Paradise Lost ~


It is never too late to have a happy childhood
                           in which adults abide by young people’s wisdom
cast away pragmatic self-indulgence where youth
                            is no crime and rigid seniority is not in itself an


~ Achievement ~


I long for ‘Kalamatsch’ that does not muddy the 
                    waters where sand is just sand when it runs through 
my fingers where rain is not acid and I can create and 
              restructure thick planks into olive braches not restrained


~ Sandpits ~


Framed as enclosure’s restrictions misguided control of
                       surveiled subjugation of collateral damage skinned 
dreams falsified in books burning but rather where the
              dung of the peace doves makes me the shining statue of 
   

~ Freedom ~ and ~ Kala ~

'Kalamatched' on 07th October 2016 and before

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/23/2016 1:39:00 AM
Wow no wonder you got the cup. The mix of morality , the futility of war , the brain washing and your childhood memories make this outstanding. It actually hurts when reading it. Taking innocence and putting him in a uniform and transfered to delusional hippy is crazy. Where did you stop? A doctor? Just curious. Soupers must wake up. This is brilliant
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/23/2016 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Jannie. Never stop...but yes you are right, I worked 25 years as a GP. Now South Africa or rather its rules and regulations do not want my 'medicine' and thus I write now. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 10/19/2016 11:56:00 AM
A very scholarly write, Kai! Congrats on your top most podium! Balveen
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/20/2016 1:37:00 AM
Thank you Balveen.
Date: 10/19/2016 9:20:00 AM
from another plain, this one, kai... congrats on your top win and huggs
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/20/2016 1:38:00 AM
Thank you Nette. Many hugs to you too. Kai
Date: 10/19/2016 7:23:00 AM
Amazing Kai! Congrats :)-luloo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/20/2016 1:38:00 AM
Thank you lulloo.
Date: 10/18/2016 10:29:00 PM
Wow, a masterpiece, Kai! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Sandra
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Date: 10/20/2016 1:39:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sandra. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 10/18/2016 7:22:00 PM
I am baptized in the complexity and beauty of this piece. I enjoyed having these words wash over and permeate my mind. Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 10/18/2016 7:18:00 PM
Well researched! Applause! Congrats, Kai!
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Date: 10/7/2016 3:49:00 AM
I grope for words to convey my appreciation ... only one turns up ... Awesome ...
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