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Waltz Wave
This form was created on Jun 13, 2020, and named for Leo Waltz, the Web Manager of Sol Magazine, it asks for a one-stanza titled poem, with nineteen lines; each line has a set number of syllables. Pattern: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1

Red painted lips, with blond curly hair and blue eyes, her doll looked pretty all dressed in pink. My daughter once loved to hold her; yet now, she's lies in a box of junk.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2023 11:24:00 AM

Hello Emile, your daughter out grew the doll. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2023 4:44:00 AM

Hello Emile, Girls do out grow their dolls when they grow up. You are welcome my friend. My friend enjoy your day. \Darlene/

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/4/2023 12:35:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, I appreciate your comments and your logical approach to life as you see it, my friend; Emile.