Juvenilia: the Worst Innocent Poetry I'Ve Penned

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I wrote this poem
just for you

Do you want to go out with me
it's okay if you don't want to
this was a truth or dare
but I like you and that's the truth

If you do want to go with me
meet me at my locker
I'll share my pixie sticks with you

Written a long time ago
posted on poetrysoup April 26, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 5:17 AM
Thanks for sharing your memories PoetPrentice.
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 7:38 PM
awww, this is so sweet!! I wish mine was really cute like yours. I have a really dorky one, the only poem I ever wrote before age 12. When you see a lame innocent limerick up , you will know it's the one I am talking about.
Green Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 5:27 PM
Ahhh, young love and pixie sticks. Nothing better in my book. Really cool my friend. I loved this look back into your world. So...what did she say? Did she meet you at the locker?
Dupins Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 7:08 PM
She never heard this wretched piece of writing. She turned out to be a really annoying idiot. That's middle school for ya. Kids think they feel love one day, then it turns out, it was just gas.
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 11:36 PM
I have no idea what pixie sticks are, but thank you for sharing this on the soup! It's very cute! Best of luck to you.
Dupins Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 12:28 AM
Oh, it's basically sugar with food coloring. The things we ate as kids... Thanks for the comment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 10:13 PM
;D this is as sweet as pixie sticks! Fun Dip!
Dupins Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 12:27 AM
You're too kind! This was absolutely horrible but she turned out to be horrible too so I guess you could say poetic justice??
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