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Juvenilia - Untitled

I’m a late bloomer! So this was an early attempt at writing poetry, long before I took classes. I had small kids and this is what I wrote about them. (Untitled) Road Runner down the street with lots of en-er-gy riding on his hot wheels jumping in the air climbing like a monkey today he’s free of care ~ Sailor girl go to sleep close your little eyes no more talking now sweetheart not one light left in the skies ~ Perky Pink likes lots of dresses along with kisses and caresses with another girl she likes to play and always has quite a lot to say ~ Entered into the Juvenilia competition on 4/26/2017 ~

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Date: 4/28/2017 10:30:00 AM
I love the vivid pictures your painted of your kids Kim, and I bet that parents all over would love to read these colorful lines to their little ones:) Amitiés
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2017 7:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Marie!
Date: 4/28/2017 10:10:00 AM
I bet your kids loved the verses as you read it to them - Great start Kim. Thanks for sharing your early poems. Love them
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2017 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Maria!
Date: 4/27/2017 5:23:00 PM
Such a nice look at some of your earlier work and I must say, you my friend, have obviously had the talent all along. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2017 5:25:00 PM
So sweet for you to say, Chris!
Date: 4/26/2017 11:07:00 PM
Very good, Kim! They are all so unique! Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2017 11:08:00 PM
Never thought i'd enter these "beauties" LOL! At the time I was barely out of poetry diapers.

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