Just...Be

Confusion, anger, and so much pain Every day silent tears I cry in vain. I want to be whole again. I want to feel my life begin. I feel like all is lost. Is this anguish my cost? Will I ever be whole? Can anyone fix this fractured soul? For now I will cry my silent tears. For now I will try to squash ALL my fears. There are way way too many. Burdens and sorrows are a sea of plenty. Do you see the way out for me? No? I thought not, so I will just.....be.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/30/2009 4:53:00 PM

For all you have gone through, your writing is quite exceptional, the way you emit your feelings is amazing in the words you choose, James

Christy Hardy

Date: 5/30/2009 1:41:00 AM

I find myself here in this poem. Emotions exposed, and needing to vent. It is times like these my friends are so special. We talk on the phone, and do a lot of praying. I have you in my prayers.....We all have problems in this sea of life, God provides a boat for us, but sometimes we try to swim on our own, and we can't handle the waves. always, Christy

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2009 1:08:00 AM

I could just feel your emotion running through your poem...hopefully things get better...God bless!

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/29/2009 11:32:00 PM

Kristy - I probably understand this poem better than most - I've felt that way in the past and it led me to drugs which led me to Prison which learned me that things back then weren't as bad as I thought they were back then - Seek the happiness within because in the end it is you and your soul that will pay the price - God Bless, mj