Just Us Three

I sit by the sea
Let it wash over me	
Soothing my pain
her ebb and her flow
For I am still here
on this Christmas Day
I did not go away
for I needed to stay
Feeling so weak
Laryngitis ~ can’t speak
So I sit here alone
for the solace I seek
Sweet memories I pray
will begin to appear
My darlings
I’m sensing
your presence is near
My two precious boys
I feel your embrace
See your sweet smiling face
thus a glimmer of hope 
Come sit beside me
Just for a short while
As we sit by the sea
Just us three…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/27/2019 11:35:00 PM
Writing is therapeutic for me, and possibly for you also, my friend. Anyway, Ann, I certainly hope so. It is nice to sit by the sea, just "you three". I love this!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/28/2019 4:18:00 AM
Yes that is so true for me too Caren. Even though some of my poems have been so full of emotion lately, just by penning my emotions I am feeling some relief which is helping the slow healing process after such a trauma. Glad you love this poem. The sea for me is the most cathartic place to be. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/25/2019 3:04:00 PM
I am happy to see you writing Ann. Writing can help at all times and any time. My thoughts are with you. This is a beautiful poem. Take care :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/25/2019 3:35:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Heidi your thoughts mean so much to me. With kindest thoughts to you dear friend. From Ann xx
Date: 12/25/2019 1:18:00 PM
Those memories are precious Ann, I hope today has been okay , I know it wont have been easy for you. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/25/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Tom at the moment I feel like I am on the outside looking in. By writing down my hopes and dreams it helps to ease the pain a little. I do hope you had a lovely day with your family and that the sun shone down, like it did here. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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