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Just Two Lines

My tears flow, glistening, as I realize no one's listening.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations on placing in Brian’s “A couple of Lines” contest with these heartfelt and all too often, true lines. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations Danielle on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Couple Of Lines". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/5/2010 1:23:00 PM

Lonely tears are the worst. Congratulations on your win. Lvoe, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:13:00 PM

Ahhhh, And congratulations. I can see how you got a win with this one. LUv, Andrea

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 7/5/2010 12:38:00 PM

I'm listening, dear Danielle. Don't cry! I'm here for youy :) Beautiful two lines. Congrats, iolanda

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:24:00 AM

Very heartfelt couplet, dear Danielle. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest.

John Freeman

Date: 7/4/2010 5:28:00 PM

Congratulations, Danielle, on your place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 10:39:00 AM

Congrats Danielle on your winning poem in Brian's contest with this remarkable write and win.. enjoy as u celebrate your holiday weekend... good luck with your own contest too.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA..

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/6/2009 9:12:00 PM

So much sorrow and pain with very few word... Very nice write...

James Fraser

Date: 6/12/2009 10:16:00 AM

Short and sad, Danielle - nicely written>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2009 2:02:00 PM

Just two lines.....but saying enough to make one feel the pain......

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2009 10:40:00 AM

A sad image in a heartfelt poem, Danielle.