Just Two Lines

My tears flow, glistening,
as I realize no one's listening.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Congratulations on placing in Brian’s “A couple of Lines” contest with these heartfelt and all too often, true lines. Smiles, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations Danielle on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Couple Of Lines". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Lonely tears are the worst. Congratulations on your win. Lvoe, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Ahhhh, And congratulations. I can see how you got a win with this one. LUv, Andrea
Scripca Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:38 PM
I'm listening, dear Danielle. Don't cry! I'm here for youy :) Beautiful two lines. Congrats, iolanda
George   Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Very heartfelt couplet, dear Danielle. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest.
Freeman Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 5:28 PM
Congratulations, Danielle, on your place. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Congrats Danielle on your winning poem in Brian's contest with this remarkable write and win.. enjoy as u celebrate your holiday weekend... good luck with your own contest too.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA..
Yates Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 9:12 PM
So much sorrow and pain with very few word... Very nice write...
Fraser Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Short and sad, Danielle - nicely written>James
Richards Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Just two lines.....but saying enough to make one feel the pain......
Devonshire Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 10:40 AM
A sad image in a heartfelt poem, Danielle.
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