Lucilla Carrillo Poet Light Verse

Just Thoughts

Just Thoughts

The Attic

Looking in the attic through the pages
of an old picture album - I found the 
historic life of me.

Morning Mist

In a morning mist, an illusion came to me,
that you were there, waiting for me.

Angels

As the stars light up the sky at night, the
angels dance in their glowing light.

               
Deep

Deep the ocean. Deep is the sea. Deep
is the love that I have for Thee...

06/10/2014
By Lucilla M. Carrillo

Note: I was just playing with words

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Jerry T Curtis August 25, 2014 at 7:14 PM This to me Is poetry, Lucilla Lucilla Carrillo August 25, 2014 at 10:08 PM Thank you so much Jerry. Glad you like it.

Elizabeth Wesley June 21, 2014 at 3:51 PM Your words are always creative and set my mind to do the same. Miss you and all the others. Love, Lizzie Lucilla Carrillo June 21, 2014 at 4:03 PM Lizzie; It is nice to see you. I am sorry too. I have not been around too much. I have been very sick. I have been in the hospital 4 times this year. I just got out yesterday. I will come back.

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera June 18, 2014 at 2:24 PM i can see you are relaxing your mind by the playing with words of thing happening around your imagination. NICE POEM!

Carl Fraser June 16, 2014 at 1:01 PM This is a great expression of how the mind jumps from one thing to the next and you display it so well with your words Lucilla, blessings Carl Lucilla Carrillo June 16, 2014 at 10:13 PM Thank you Carl for your nice comment.

Kelly Deschler June 12, 2014 at 10:49 PM This is a very unique write of beautiful random flowing thoughts.... I have a notebook that I keep my inspirations in, and it looks very much like this.... I enjoyed reading your poem tonight, Lucilla! Nice work! Lucilla Carrillo June 13, 2014 at 2:00 AM Thank you Kelly, glad you like them.

Harry Horsman June 11, 2014 at 11:04 AM wow i just love these, you have them as light poetry, oh the feeling they profess, are so powerfull Lucilla Carrillo June 11, 2014 at 1:01 PM Thank you Harry. I'm glad that you stopped by.

Nette Onclaud June 10, 2014 at 7:12 PM you fill me up with these vignettes of life and love... lovely, lucy!. huggs and prayers.. how are you? Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 7:22 PM Thank you Nette; I need some prayers this week.

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2014 at 6:48 PM wow, I really enjoyed this set of little poems. With some tweeking, they could become haiku or sijo or something. GREAT job, dear. The last one my favorite. Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 7:21 PM Thank you Andrea; I'm glad that you like them.

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2014 at 6:47 PM Hi, Lucilla, First I had to tell ya, yeah I made up the Sinatra ghost. Always wondered how far the guy was into the mafia though. Can you imagine a mafia ghost? hahaha. now to your poem. Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 7:20 PM I always knew that he was deep into the Mafia. He was was always telling everybody - I'll put you in the trunk. May he rest in peace

Eileen Manassian June 10, 2014 at 2:23 PM You play beautifully, my dear. Lovely and sweet write. I hope you are keeping well. Love you Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 3:05 PM Thank you Eileen; I would like to pay something different, but for now that's all I can do. I will visit you soon.

Ken Carroll June 10, 2014 at 1:59 PM Some wonderful introspective reflections here Lucilla! Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 3:06 PM Thank you Ken for the nice comment.

Jan Allison June 10, 2014 at 1:51 PM Every single poem is stunning in its own right - put together it is simply sensational Lucilla! Hugs as ever Jan xxxx Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 3:07 PM Thank you Jan. I am glad you like it.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2014 at 1:23 PM - The thoughts and pictures ..... from time that went too quickly ..... melancholy and enjoyable - love it, Lucilla :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 1:41 PM Thank you Anne Lise for reading my Thoughts.

Tim Smith June 10, 2014 at 1:20 PM Even though they are just thoughts they stand alone and could be the beginning to a masterpiece...Hugs Tim Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 1:45 PM Thanks Tim. You make me fee good. A master piece hah.

Pace Ink-U-Script June 10, 2014 at 1:12 PM You have done what I've always wanted to do...This is great work from a talented artist! Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 1:44 PM Hi Pace; you just made my day. I shall visit soon.

Frederic Parker June 10, 2014 at 1:07 PM you have captured the wonder of it all perfectly Lucilla Carrillo June 10, 2014 at 1:47 PM Thank you Frederic; I am glad that you like it. I will visit later.