Just the Two of Us

If I were the only person left in the world Besides you, of course, I am wondering, Do you think we would be able to get along? Or would you insist I adopt your way of thinking? Could we get together and come to agreement, Or would you demand everything go your way? If I were the only person left in the world Besides you, of course, I am wondering, Would we be willing to divvy up and divide equally? Or would you want far more than your share? Could we learn to live side by side amicably, Or would I always have to be afraid? If I were the only person left in the world Besides you, of course, I am wondering … Dare I trust we’d be available in each other’s need? Or must I be on guard, lest you take advantage? After all, if two people cannot live together in peace How can we expect millions of people to do so?
Written April 7, 2022
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Leffanta Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 11:30 AM
Cain and Abel set a precedent from which we may never recover despite your deep thoughts . . . .
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 12:34 PM
I appreciate your thoughts, Rico. In my way of thinking, however, the story of Cain and Abel is a very, very old fable, probably told to illustrate what can happen when jealousy and covetousness prevails in the human heart. Who knows?
Cunningham Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 11:03 AM
With your wisdom and my humour I'm sure we'd get on like a house on fire Tom. PS throw in a bottle of wine.
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Oh, definitely, Tom...but I'm not sure of the wisdom thing. We'd probably get on like peas in a pod.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 4:49 AM
This is always something to think about "Would we be willing to divvy up and divide equally? Or would you want far more than your share?" Children - especially gifted children are acutely aware of being fair.
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 8:58 AM
Yes, they are, Caren. Indeed! Kids seem to come by this instinctively, but somewhere along the way we adults forget it.
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 8:32 PM
After all, the whole world is pixilated except for you and me. And I'm not sure about you. ~ from 'Arsenic and Old Lace,' the old B&W movie. Smiles, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 9:32 PM
Well, of course, that always works in the opposite, too, gw. I'd like to believe that you and I would work things out in a friendly manner, that we would not resort to fisticuffs or weapons, and that we would go on a great search for spouses so we could re-populate the earth. Ha! How's that?
Calasibetta Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Poignant write~you make a good point; if we can't trust one another, how can we expect our world to be at peace? I do believe it is the conundrum of humankind. :)Paulette
Hankins Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 6:52 PM
Thank you, Paulette. I really enjoyed reading your insightful comment. It may well be the "conundrum of humankind."
Boles Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 4:44 PM
Milt, if there's equilibrium, equanimity and decorum, then I'd say there's a possibility of people getting along making this scenario the norm. Your questions are legitimate and must be met with honest, reputable answers from our world leaders!...ab
Hankins Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 6:53 PM
I think so, Anselmo. But, first, I think they must be answered by every one of us...every human being, placing themselves in this scenario and asking the questions. Of course, we do not live in a utopia, but we, as an international group, can ask the right questions and give them some thought and effort.
Chies Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 3:23 PM
Great reflection on this poem, Milton.
Hankins Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much, Marco, for your read and your encouragement.
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