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Just the Two of Us

If I were the only person left in the world Besides you, of course, I am wondering, Do you think we would be able to get along? Or would you insist I adopt your way of thinking? Could we get together and come to agreement, Or would you demand everything go your way? If I were the only person left in the world Besides you, of course, I am wondering, Would we be willing to divvy up and divide equally? Or would you want far more than your share? Could we learn to live side by side amicably, Or would I always have to be afraid? If I were the only person left in the world Besides you, of course, I am wondering … Dare I trust we’d be available in each other’s need? Or must I be on guard, lest you take advantage? After all, if two people cannot live together in peace How can we expect millions of people to do so? Written April 7, 2022

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/8/2022 11:30:00 AM

Cain and Abel set a precedent from which we may never recover despite your deep thoughts . . . .

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2022 12:34:00 PM

I appreciate your thoughts, Rico. In my way of thinking, however, the story of Cain and Abel is a very, very old fable, probably told to illustrate what can happen when jealousy and covetousness prevails in the human heart. Who knows?

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/8/2022 11:03:00 AM

With your wisdom and my humour I'm sure we'd get on like a house on fire Tom. PS throw in a bottle of wine.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2022 11:06:00 AM

Oh, definitely, Tom...but I'm not sure of the wisdom thing. We'd probably get on like peas in a pod.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2022 4:49:00 AM

This is always something to think about "Would we be willing to divvy up and divide equally? Or would you want far more than your share?" Children - especially gifted children are acutely aware of being fair.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2022 8:58:00 AM

Yes, they are, Caren. Indeed! Kids seem to come by this instinctively, but somewhere along the way we adults forget it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/7/2022 8:32:00 PM

After all, the whole world is pixilated except for you and me. And I'm not sure about you. ~ from 'Arsenic and Old Lace,' the old B&W movie. Smiles, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/7/2022 9:32:00 PM

Well, of course, that always works in the opposite, too, gw. I'd like to believe that you and I would work things out in a friendly manner, that we would not resort to fisticuffs or weapons, and that we would go on a great search for spouses so we could re-populate the earth. Ha! How's that?

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/7/2022 5:05:00 PM

Poignant write~you make a good point; if we can't trust one another, how can we expect our world to be at peace? I do believe it is the conundrum of humankind. :)Paulette

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/7/2022 6:52:00 PM

Thank you, Paulette. I really enjoyed reading your insightful comment. It may well be the "conundrum of humankind."

Anselmo Boles

Date: 4/7/2022 4:44:00 PM

Milt, if there's equilibrium, equanimity and decorum, then I'd say there's a possibility of people getting along making this scenario the norm. Your questions are legitimate and must be met with honest, reputable answers from our world leaders!...ab

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/7/2022 6:53:00 PM

I think so, Anselmo. But, first, I think they must be answered by every one of us...every human being, placing themselves in this scenario and asking the questions. Of course, we do not live in a utopia, but we, as an international group, can ask the right questions and give them some thought and effort.

Marco Chies

Date: 4/7/2022 3:23:00 PM

Great reflection on this poem, Milton.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/7/2022 6:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Marco, for your read and your encouragement.