Just Right Here

Outburst of joy from the silvery streaks,
Of skies with blue and clouds that speak -
Silenced by the breeze, the waves flow through
Washing the past...for a life so new.
 
If only my heart could touch you now
It will speak of love and a solemn vow
With a new day from a lullabye of the night
My life with you starts a brighter sight.
 
You wake me up from my deep slumber
When all else were gone in mid-September
We met and crossed the bridge in May
I held your hand..."I'm willing to stay."
 
Now the sun is up and seeks for us, apart
A lot of questions congest my heart
Why should we be so far from each other?
Will destiny lead us through, so soon to be together?
 
I ache so much to wake up, alone
From the sturdy night my strength can hone
Lest I forget that, there's always YOU, my day should start
I will just close my eyes...and look inside my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 24, 2009 at 3:04 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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October 22, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Wonderful poem, Annie. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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October 19, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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October 18, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Annie. Love, Carol
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September 21, 2009 at 4:30 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Annie. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2009 at 4:03 AM
Beautiful, beautiful poem Annie, a delight to read>>James
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September 20, 2009 at 3:08 AM
Nicely done with good Rhyme and Rhythm. Keep writing. Sara
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