Just Rhymemember That

I can make a rhyme
It will cost you just a dime
Two nickels or ten pennies would do fine
Now please don't start to wine
Or soon, you just may find
You're standing in the corner doing time
Now, today I'm going to shine
You should simply see the sign
By the smile on my face, you know I'm kind
Sometimes I'm in a bind
And it seems like such a climb
But you surely know, I'm really in my prime
So I, will write it in a line
It won't hardly take much time
So fast, it seems like it should be a crime
But if you think it all sublime
And things don't really chime
You, just show me yours, and I will show you mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gulley Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 9:17 AM
A nice rhyming poem Jerry, I like the way it just continued on and ends with a happy grin, I really like this one.... Sharon
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 5:32 PM
....I only have a nickel and four pesos....what will that get me?
Curtis Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:01 PM
I only do prose for pesos, señor tim
Manassian Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:05 PM
;) Loved this one, Jerry...though that last line is....well, ambiguous. We are talking about poetry, eh? Hugs
Curtis Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Rhymes---show me yours---and I will show you my--rhymes lol
Godwin Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 11:27 AM
I enjoyed your poem very much ... CayCay
Curtis Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Thank you CayCay
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 8:40 AM
My preferred style is rhyme Jerry. Sadly you see so much forced rhyme and it spoils my enjoyment of a poem as it doesn't make sense - hence I don't comment:-) hugs Jan xx reads and comments are at a premium at the moment:-(
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:08 PM
errr I think its a comment so I liked it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Curtis Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:04 PM
So was this a comment or not---lol
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