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Just Rhymemember That

I can make a rhyme It will cost you just a dime Two nickels or ten pennies would do fine Now please don't start to wine Or soon, you just may find You're standing in the corner doing time Now, today I'm going to shine You should simply see the sign By the smile on my face, you know I'm kind Sometimes I'm in a bind And it seems like such a climb But you surely know, I'm really in my prime So I, will write it in a line It won't hardly take much time So fast, it seems like it should be a crime But if you think it all sublime And things don't really chime You, just show me yours, and I will show you mine

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Date: 9/9/2015 9:17:00 AM
A nice rhyming poem Jerry, I like the way it just continued on and ends with a happy grin, I really like this one.... Sharon
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Date: 9/1/2015 5:32:00 PM
....I only have a nickel and four pesos....what will that get me?
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2015 4:01:00 PM
I only do prose for pesos, señor tim
Date: 9/1/2015 1:05:00 PM
;) Loved this one, Jerry...though that last line is....well, ambiguous. We are talking about poetry, eh? Hugs
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2015 4:03:00 PM
Rhymes---show me yours---and I will show you my--rhymes lol
Date: 9/1/2015 11:27:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem very much ... CayCay
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thank you CayCay
Date: 9/1/2015 8:40:00 AM
My preferred style is rhyme Jerry. Sadly you see so much forced rhyme and it spoils my enjoyment of a poem as it doesn't make sense - hence I don't comment:-) hugs Jan xx reads and comments are at a premium at the moment:-(
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2015 4:08:00 PM
errr I think its a comment so I liked it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2015 4:04:00 PM
So was this a comment or not---lol

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