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.                     Better to have nothing, than lose the one you love.

Sometimes When we have a loving relationship Life gets in the way The pressures of work money worries Piles of unpaid bills Not enough time for each other The relationship erodes and folds You try but you go separate ways When we were poor my love and I Had nothing We scrimped and saved For the little we had Things started to change When we got rich And from nothing We had everything we'd want to need A bigger house two new cars And instead of smoking cigarettes I then smoked cigars Gave big tips in restaurants and fancy hotels Holiday'ed in Nashville And on stage played guitar The gap between us just got to wide And the relationship we'd built together Became a stormy place And our love just like a rose began to die Yes we had everything we needed Accept each other And ourselves We finally managed to bury the hatchet And put our troubles on the shelf To save ourselves Packing up to go our separate ways The love we had was buried under a thin layer of snow Both looking at our wedding photograph Broke our hearts in too With tears in our eyes Held each other for a hug Feeling her warm body Her heart next to mine I could feel her heart race Matching mine Then she looked up at me With her dewy limpid eyes And whispers "'Let's make love for the last time'' We made love that day Both our bodies soothingly warm Skin so soft Looking at other Through brand-new eyes That spoke and smiled The love passion and a need so strong Just as those sweet warm feelings When we first met So wrapped up in love Two eclipsed into one Alone Under the same sun I looked at her Her face looked so beautiful Her playful cheeky eyes Smiling like the sun Saying I need and want you To pleasure and take me right now! We spent the rest of the day Kissing giving sharing and caring With such so much hunger And tenderness and finesse Weaving bodies skin-to-skin Soft butterfly kisses Awakening a new dawn A new pain so sweet As we both enjoyed the lavish feast Drinking intoxicating heady summer wine We both melted into each other The rush of euphoric emotions Overflowing and rekindling the intense fire After we'd climbed and reached the mountain peak And came down We lay in others' welcoming pleading arms The warm embers still aglow Her arm around me Her sweet head gently nuzzled upon my chest Made me feel like I was a giant And a man Her lustrous silken hair Hanging and cascading down Listening to the throbbing beat of my heart Drifting off and sailing On calm water Somewhere within a distant dream We spent time kissing each other With so much sincerity and honesty Joining two hearts together again as one And whispering how much we missed And loved each other Appreciated and valued Each other more than any treasure Trinket or gold We mutually agreed to stay together Forever and beyond We both realised the truth as the Beatles had said "'Money Can't buy you love'' There are much more important things Totally free We all need money to live And eat But we remembered what was really important When once we had nothing The well was dry But we had each other We put first And although we struggled We were happy What good is selling your soul For wealth And losing each other. "Inspired by a friend's Mother. " We were much happier, when we had nothing, just a stone cottage.''

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Date: 3/26/2024 4:03:00 PM
inspirational words, Peter, of the journey of love found, lost, and found again-a testament to a couple's willingness to bury the hatchet so to speak. I liked the quote at the end,"We were much happier when we had nothing." Sometimes life and our pursuits gets in the way of building and maintaining a relationship. What a wonderful read this evening, Sara
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 6:58:00 PM
Sara, you are so kind. The Quote at the end, was something, a friend's mother said years ago .They became so rich, but where did it get them? They spilt sadly. Things got in the way. It takes a lot to Bury the hatchet and one side used it.Enjoy the feast of the week heartfelt best wishes. Thank you. Stay safe. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 10:15:00 AM
Hello Pete, For a while you lost each other. then slowly you found each other. your love grew. You found your soulmate. enjoy your day my friend. /darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/28/2024 3:17:00 PM
Hello Pete, I am doing exercise for tendinitis every day. I do them twice a day. Sometimes I I will get through this. wear a brace during the day. Yet every night I wear the brace when i sleep. I had this since December. I will get through this. Thank you Pete my friend. /Darlene/
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/27/2024 1:33:00 AM
Darlene, Love the name. strangely enough, I was talking to a friend on the weekend His brother and He both have,Ten Dintis. All three of us are guitarists. My friend showed his brother, how he got rid of his, with simple exercises not too much, but slowly day to day. His brother got some, relief very quickly. Hope you get better soon my friend. Pete.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2024 11:07:00 AM
Hello Pete, Oh, I thought it was. I am fine Pete. I have ten dintis in my left thumb I am dealing with. Other then I am doing fine. Thank you. Money does not always bring happiness. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 10:21:00 AM
If only my friend. It's not true. Just something someone said, they were happier when they were broke. Hope you are keeping well. Thank you so much, I'm blessed. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful journey of love, loss and healing, along with an important moral lesson. Very nice Peter
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. A pleasure to hear from you friend. Yes, it was the friend's Mother who said, She and her Hubby, were happier when they were broke and now. their wealthy The y both split. strange really, you'd think the would have been happier. Take care.Pete.

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