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This is one of the embroidered pictures my Mom made whereby I drew the picture on fabric stretched on a frame, and she would "paint" it with her thread using small stitches. This one is 11" x 15.5". 

To Mom: 1916-1971 So many years ago you left, that's true- you, only fifty-five- I, thirty-two. So many things you missed from that day on; so much of you I missed since you've been gone. If only- for one day, you could come see, with pride and joy, your dear, sweet family. To meet your grandkids, then so young, now grown and married with grown children of their own. Just one more day to reminisce the past, the wondrous times we spent that went too fast- like Sunday dinners spent with you and Dad, where little ones enjoyed the time they had. Just one more day for us to pause with care and talk about the things we did not share, like recipes you kept inside your head, now lost, not ever written to be read. Just one more day for me to watch in awe you needlepoint those pictures I would draw; with tiny stitches, you'd create great art, a thread-filled painting, woven from your heart. Just one more day, to hold you tenderly, for in the dark, you slipped away from me, not knowing God would take you that sad night, no chance for hugs, goodbyes for us in sight. Just one more day to say I still love you for being there for me, forever true; to thank you for your guidance and your love. I pray you feel these yearnings from above. Just one more day, just one more heartfelt try to see you once again- then say goodbye. December 5, 2015 ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: From The Heart Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Judged: 10/28/2020 Form: Couplet

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Date: 10/30/2020 2:37:00 AM
Times may change but your memories last forever. A poignant and real write from the heart.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 5:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gary, for your visit and uplifting comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 10/29/2020 6:28:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me miss my Mom so much. God bless you.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, Beata, for stopping by with your congrats and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/28/2020 8:28:00 PM
Such an incredibly moving piece of work. Your mother would be so proud of you on so many levels. I loved the poem!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Milton! I appreciate your visit and positive comments very much. Sandra
Date: 10/28/2020 4:27:00 PM
Sandra, you have opened all the doors to your lovely heartfelt emotions with your mother. The ultimate in poetic revealing of one's self for another. Such honest and warm verse of love between mother and daughter. Congratulations on your top finish. Well done, well deserved.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Greg, for your visit and very in-depth, uplifting comments, and congratulations. I appreciate them so much. Sandra
Date: 10/28/2020 3:31:00 PM
Nicely done Sandra. Congratulations on the win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 4:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda, for your many visits and lovely comments. I appreciate them very much! Sandra :)
Date: 10/28/2020 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Sandra. Beautiful story and picture!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 4:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam, for the congrats and positive comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 10/28/2020 1:14:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Way to go. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 4:57:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your visit, and congrats! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/28/2020 1:02:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Sandra. So moving and descriptive! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for your uplifting, positive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/28/2020 11:49:00 AM
Congrats on your top win :) I love it. God bless you my dear friend. Thank you for entering your masterpiece :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2020 4:55:00 PM
Thank you, Regina, for the wonderful contest and my awesome trophy placement, and your uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/31/2016 9:17:00 AM
- A great and moving choice of your poems, congratulations Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2016 7:13:00 AM
How beautiful and touching this is, Sandra! Oh for just one more day! There are always some things which we still have to say face to face...I like the embroidered picture which you posted above, too. ~ Congratulations on placing first...very much deserved. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/30/2016 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on you win, Sandra, another beautiful creation ! Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/30/2016 7:07:00 PM
Oh, Eve, thank you once again for another fine contest and to allow us to present new or old poems. I was happy to present this poem again as a tribute to my dear mom and am so honored and thankful for my placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/30/2016 2:40:00 PM
Heartfelt sentiments, Sandra -- but, if you had one more day, you would surely want another! ;-) Congrats on your placement.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/30/2016 7:50:00 PM
Hi, Tom, yes...you are right. Thank you for your visit and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 12/16/2015 12:32:00 AM
SANDRA, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/16/2015 4:55:00 PM
Hi Skat, thank you so much. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/14/2015 7:38:00 AM
That was beautiful Sandra I felt the longing in your words.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/16/2015 4:56:00 PM
Thank you, James. Yes, it was a sad time for me. Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 11:55:00 PM
I don't know how Laura could choose between all these entries. I loved your entry Sandra and would have given it a number one too! I would have had a really difficult time trying to choose and given them all a number one! Congratulations on your win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/16/2015 4:57:00 PM
Yes, Connie, all the entries were so heartfelt for sure. Thanks so much for your supportive comments and congratulations. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 11:38:00 PM
Sandra, such a sad yet beautiful written 7, my mother kept her recipes in her head also, congratulations on a wonderful win, ~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/16/2015 4:58:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, I appreciate your uplifting comments and nice 7 for my poem. I know that we both share the deep love for our moms and how much we miss them. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 5:00:00 PM
Beautiful piece! Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/13/2015 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. I appreciate your visit and positive comment. Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 4:48:00 PM
Oh, Sandra - I barely made it through this emotional poem, almost lost it about the recipes. I could not 'finalize' one more day thoughts for Dad, just couldn't pinpoint content and this may be why - it is such a bittersweet and sad feeling to linger with as you must have writing/feeling this lovely and lingering poem. She was too young ... CayCay ... 7
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:37:00 PM
Beautiful... the couplets and the art. congrats
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/13/2015 4:06:00 PM
Hi Lin, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 3:34:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Sandra I LOVED this one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/13/2015 4:06:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 3:16:00 PM
Just beautiful Sandra...thank you for being a part of my contest..*smiles* -luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/13/2015 4:07:00 PM
Hi Laura Loo, thank you for sponsoring such a fine contest. And thank you for my placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/7/2015 4:10:00 AM
An emotional knockout Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/9/2015 4:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/5/2015 6:33:00 PM
nice sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/5/2015 8:06:00 PM
So nice of you to stop by Francis. Thank you for the nice comment. Sandra
Date: 12/5/2015 6:25:00 PM
Oh Sandra - if only you could have one more day - she would be so so proud of you ... this brought a tear to my eye - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/5/2015 8:07:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much for your supportive and uplifting comment. Yes...if only. Hugs, Sandra

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