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Just One More Day

JUST ONE MORE DAY if i could see you just one more day, i would turn around and run away i would hope that it was just a horrible dream yes, i know it's crass and it may sound mean but, now my dreams have all come true so, i guess i should be thanking you you chose to die and go away i never thought i'd see the day that grief and pain could transform like a beautiful rainbow after a storm into real happiness and true love your death, it seems, was a gift from above saying this is probably wrong but the kids didn't really mourn for too long they're all ok and so am i i don't feel guilty and they no longer cry you could have just left and walked away instead of doing what you did that day but as they say about mysterious ways god worked it out without delay i'm now married to the love of my youth I know true love and that's the truth the kids all love her, the youngest knows no other they even call her mom, because she's their mother the kids also have friends in their new school in their new town and new house with a pool i have to be real, and i can't be fake my life with you was a big mistake so really if i could see you just one more day Without a thought I'd tell you... just go away 12/03/2015

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Date: 12/9/2015 8:42:00 AM
Well, until we take our last breath, there's still redeeming quality. Seems some folks go out staying stubborn to the holy spirit, and change is ignored. You wrote from an honest standpoint, and that's the part I admire most. Though I like couplet form and your matter of fact stance. Thanks for stopping by with your warmth.
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Date: 12/3/2015 3:58:00 PM
maybe it is true that the reason she left....Was God's Hand Nudging you to rebuild yourself....after the wrong path she had you on....it is easy to understand that Life continues after Love is gone....awesome jay....
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