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Just One

Crushed beneath the skin of Brigit, hollowed out, Stuffed full of mead & words; I drift here Losing touch, losing form Wishing there was one, just one who never hated me. -------------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/29/2010 12:16:00 PM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Merritt. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:32:00 AM
True feeling which arises at times!!!!!!!! beautiful!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:17:00 AM
Nice display of breaking feelings, merritt
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:50:00 AM
wow! Merritt , strong broken feelings, It must be hard to when one thinks the whole world is against us. I know exactly the feeling! Enjoyed your poem,.p.d.
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