Just One

Crushed beneath the skin of Brigit, hollowed out,

Stuffed full of mead & words;

 

I drift here

 

Losing touch, losing form

 

Wishing there was one,

just one who never hated me.

 

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 12:16 PM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Merritt. Love, Carol
Thaker Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:32 AM
True feeling which arises at times!!!!!!!! beautiful!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:17 AM
Nice display of breaking feelings, merritt
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September 29, 2010 at 7:50 AM
wow! Merritt , strong broken feelings, It must be hard to when one thinks the whole world is against us. I know exactly the feeling! Enjoyed your poem,.p.d.
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