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Just Me and You

(Sing to the tune of Close to You, by the Carpenters) Why, O, why this night has nary a clue Yet, my darling how you always knew Dream of the night is just me and you Just me and you Why, O, why stars up high zealously pry When doting moon vies marigold skies They love it too, the dream is so true Just me and you When so far you are, yet so close you feel How earnestly whispers of longing plea Unveil gently the missives of memories Just you and me, sweet as can be, yearning to be Why, O, why nightingales echo the tune When song of the dawn robins croon They love it too, the dream is so true Just me and you When so far you are, yet so close you feel How earnestly whispers of longing plea Unveil gently the missives of memories Just you and me, sweet as can be, yearning to be Why, O, why this night has nary a clue Yet, my darling how you always knew The song of the dawn is just me and you Just me and you The song of the dawn is just me and you Just me and you Ah, just me and you La, just me and you Ah, just me and you La, just me and you October 13, 2021 Poem of the day on October 14, 2021

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Fin Chuuk

Date: 4/1/2023 2:23:00 PM

What a delightful charming lovely and beautiful song. Only if I still have my ukulele, I would have loved to strum along with this one. :)

Anil Deo

Date: 2/19/2022 9:53:00 AM

A writer of melodious music too. Some couples are a bottomless fount of LOVE, Tenderness, Poetry . Days after st. Valentine's, gr8 read

Karen Croft

Date: 1/31/2022 9:02:00 AM

very beautiful!

Michael Tor

Date: 1/29/2022 3:14:00 PM

A winning write Vijay wonderful piece sang to music. Be blessed my friend...

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/11/2021 6:38:00 PM

Vijay, The gifts come back tenfold in a life lived well. Though sad to think perhaps, life's best seemed to elude Miss Karen. A fine tribute to those memories many hold dear in your Lyric. -Richard

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/18/2021 6:45:00 AM

So musical... Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved.. Blessings

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/5/2021 11:07:00 PM

Congratulations on this lovely lyrical poem being honored with POTD. Sorry this comment is belated Vijay. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus

Date: 10/24/2021 1:20:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Vijay. These lyrics and the accompanying song can easily melt a romantic heart! ~ Best regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/23/2021 4:58:00 AM

A lovely lyric, Vijay, hope to see it placed high:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2021 12:38:00 PM

Much appreciate, Jo--many thanks for stopping by.

Joseph May

Date: 10/19/2021 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful take on the song Vijay, Nicely done

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2021 4:23:00 AM

So glad to hear. Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2021 5:25:00 PM

Great job penning this!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/18/2021 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Karen for your visit and comments--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/17/2021 1:49:00 AM

Wonderful poetry, Vijay, well deserved POTD.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/17/2021 3:58:00 PM

Thank you Harry--much appreciate, as always.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/16/2021 7:00:00 AM

I have always LOVED the Carpenters. You chose a great topic for this lovely, romantic masterpiece, Vijay! "Missives of memories"--I love that. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/17/2021 3:57:00 PM

They are so special, Janice. Glad you are a fan too. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/15/2021 1:31:00 PM

When poetry merges with music.. when lyrics embrace melody.. when each word rhymes with its tune.. Just Beauty and You, dear Vijay! The soul dances to the rhythm of your lyrics! Worthy of all the honour and recognition! Congratulations on your POTD acknowledgement! A great delight to read you! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2021 3:40:00 PM

Glad to see you again after a long time, Besma. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/15/2021 1:23:00 PM

Lovely piece Vijay, congrats on POTD too. Blessings, Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2021 3:39:00 PM

Thank you Gordon. Much appreciate. Regards.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/14/2021 11:37:00 PM

Such a deserved honor, to be given POTD for this exceptional poem as always your romance and love always take center stage, kudos Vijay dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2021 6:00:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind feedback, Jennifer. Many thanks my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/14/2021 6:55:00 PM

I can almost hear your voice crooning this every so sweetly Vijay, You drew a smile from me and mushed my heart, How do you do it ?

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2021 5:59:00 AM

Thank you for your kind feedback Vienna. Much appreciate. many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/14/2021 4:49:00 PM

And the melody plays on and on... Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. Your words hold beauty and romance. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2021 5:58:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate Brandy. Many thanks.

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/14/2021 4:15:00 PM

Well done, congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2021 5:57:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Mark. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/14/2021 3:57:00 PM

So beautiful Vijay, your words fit the tune beautifully. I love that song “Close to you” by the Carpenters and love your lyrics too. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2021 5:57:00 AM

Yes indeed--such a beautiful song and I love Karen's voice. Much appreciate Belle your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 10/14/2021 1:10:00 PM

Beautiful write, Congrats on POTD Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2021 1:51:00 PM

Thank you Joseph for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/14/2021 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2021 1:51:00 PM

Glad you stopped by Milton. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2021 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2021 10:10:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Eve. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/14/2021 9:17:00 AM

Wow! Vijay, Your lyrics are so written. You picked the perfect song to set them to. I found them to be dreamy and romantic. Congratulations on getting the poem the day. It was deserved. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2021 10:09:00 AM

Thank you my friend. You are always so very kind. Much appreciate, as always, Alexis.

Constance La France

Date: 10/14/2021 8:48:00 AM

Vijay, wonderful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2021 10:08:00 AM

Glad to hear from you Constance. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.