JUST LIKE WE USED TO DO


Looks so peaceful there upon thy grave 
where once these flowers never bloomed 
I think the concrete angel on your stone 
is lipping me a truth I've never known 

Up there in heaven where you are 
I could not rest like you my love 
These hands were made for toiling darlin' 
AND this heart was made for loving you, alone 

Looks so calm here yet a storm is brewing 
shackling my thoughts and rendering me sad
I think its almost time for God to close the gate 
but if I hurry, maybe I can snatch you back to life ;

Up there where doves cry and Angels sigh 
where flowers bloom at will on Abba's yonder sill 
There is a bench for two engraved by you,   
some day we'll sit there just like we used to do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Radice Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 12:07 AM
This is so beautifully written. True love lasts forever. A very poignant last line that lingered long after I first read this. Cheers - Gary
Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 12:21 PM
What a great write with a great ending. Have a great day writing away.................
DiMino Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 2:49 PM
Yes, I can relate to such profound love. They are never gone in spirit -- I have so wept. Blessings my friend. Terrific poem. Old school beautiful heartfelt form.
Rose  Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 11:54 PM
Yes when it comes to love, old school is best, the kind that stays with you a lifetime, from youth til' death, and beyond too, thanks for always reading me so well dear Joe:)
mysore Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 2:46 AM
strong emotive thoughts dear, teared me up.
Rose  Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 1:59 PM
The older I get Thriveni, the more I cherish love and all that has been given to me freely, love xo
Buhagiar Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Dear friend, such a mystic poem that touches the heart. I can relate, of course. One day I'll meet my dear Lilian. It's in His hand. Incredibly beautiful poem.
Rose  Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 3:00 PM
Yes I am sure one day you and Lilian will sit on your special bench and kiss away the days and nights forever as God intended. Love
Gifford Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Very touching and beautifully written, Rose. Losing a loved one is so hard, sending a big hug your way, my friend.
Rose  Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Thanks for visiting my page dear Zyrool
Rodgers Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Dear Rose, Oh how I loved reading your heartfelt letter poem. It is so full of love and caring, and memories. Beautiful! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rose  Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Thank you for reading Daniel
One Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 4:14 AM
A beautiful and tender poem dear Vienna, we all hope ot meet loved ones again and do the things we used to do..
Rose  Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Thank you for stopping by my poem :)
Rolland Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 3:59 AM
so deep and touching remarkable images , thanks Rose for the beautiful poem
Rose  Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Thank you for remembering me :)
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