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Just Kiss Me

Kiss me softly in the rain   
(oh so longingly) Kiss Me

moist moments melt
still hearts   flutter

skip, 
        splash, 
                    sputter

romance washed together
by chance  
                 once more

brush your wetness 
upon my blushed cheek

close your eyes
   and
     Just Kiss Me

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2017

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May 29, 2017 at 12:15 PM

Hello Tim. Good Afternoon. Sorry it has taken me so long to turn to your page. My goodness. I love this. Without a doubt expressive. Truly to be shared by two special people. And yes to be read out loud with emphasis and passion. You have reached the emotive factor for certain. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done entirely Tim.

May 28, 2017 at 12:20 AM

A chance meeting in the rain? Has fate stepped in again?

May 26, 2017 at 3:40 PM

She's probably waiting for you to kiss her first ;) kisses in the rain, soooooo sweet and romantic. Kisses to you Tim, on the blushed cheek ;)

Charmaine Chircop

May 26, 2017 at 2:24 PM

Oh so very sweet and soft..Nothing more beautiful than kisses in the rain.

May 26, 2017 at 12:24 AM

My eyes are closed in anticipation. ;-) and I love the rain. Nice one, Tim.

Dale Gregory Cozart

May 25, 2017 at 4:25 PM

This is really sexy!

May 25, 2017 at 3:02 PM

Kiss me please,,, ! Love the pattern, the topic, and the way it is expressed, Tim, the romantic.... ~*

May 25, 2017 at 4:03 PM

Tim is such a versatile writer but I agree i do love his romantic poems too Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

May 25, 2017 at 3:00 PM

How romantic <3 and fun! Nicely done Tim :)

May 25, 2017 at 2:48 PM

I'm with Mystic Rose, kisses in the rain, nothing sweeter, such a romantic feeling. Nicely crafted Tim.

May 25, 2017 at 2:47 PM

I love the way you put this poem together Tim. Sweet and fun... skip, splash, sputter. Great! :)

May 25, 2017 at 2:46 PM

oh go on then if I must - seriously a beautiful sensual poem - how could she resist!:-) hugs Jan xx

May 25, 2017 at 2:42 PM

Perhaps she will, Tim. Have you been being a good boy?

May 25, 2017 at 2:34 PM

Aww, so sweet, skip, splash, sputter :) How sensual, love it! Wow, got some feelz!

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